[Report This]Date: December 06 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow, it’s been a while, but honestly, I have been so busy that I almost forgot about this story, haha.
Wow, lots of things happened in this chapter! I’m also glad you added details to what happened in the previous chapters so we can catch up.
The Sue Ann scene bothered me, because it was very similar to the Noreen scene just a few chapters back. Even Shannon says that Chris tried the same rescue attempt. Lol. I’m not disappointed at Sue Ann, but the trend is that when someone other than Shannon gets close to Chris, Shannon gets Chris in some dramatic fashion. For me, I knew Sue Ann was just a tease, there wasn’t a chance that she was going to escape with Chris.
Did Shannon really question why Chris likes Sue Ann? Lol! She is much nicer than Shannon. That’s why! And then Shannon pointed to her assets stating that she had bigger breasts and a bigger butt as if that’s universally better in the interests of all guys. Personally, I find Sue Ann hotter because of her fit body rather than Shannon’s big curves. Even Noreen earns my pick over Shannon.
My favorite part of this chapter was the summary of Shannon’s boyfriend. So much action and story happened and it was entertaining to read even though it was all in third person.
Part of me wanted Steve to escape and that’s how Shannon lost him rather than Shannon killing him. That way, Steve can return to the story in anothe giantess’s hands. (I’m only saying this because I would like to see another giantess have some fun again.) I mean, even Mrs. Carson could find Steve and get her way with him since Shannon is hanging onto Chris.
Also, why is Chris getting even smaller? Wasn’t he just growing from 1 inch last chapter? I thought he was going to grow to 2 feet soon....so we could have that Mrs. Carson and Chris chapter.
Anyway, I hope you post soon. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, I know it’s been a couple weeks, but you might have to reread a few previous chapters to remember all the details. SPOILER ALERT: In the end of part one, remember that Chris got the potion spilled on him and began reshrinking: First, down to an inch tall; then, while in the back of Shannon’s pantie in the next chapter, even smaller. But I completely understand how it could be easy to forget. For someone just now starting I read the story, the time between chapters is minimal, but for avid followers from the beginning, like yourself, it has been a while: I started posting this story in February; 10 months later and it’s still not finished.
As far as the Sue Ann and Noreen visits being similar, in my defense, Several portions of the story were outlined before others. Sue and was always going to return, Noreen just happened to find her way in to the story, and due to her being so popular (thanks to you), I wanted her to show up in the later chapters. I’m not sure how things will end up with her, but trust me, this is the last that you’ll see ignorin i’m not sure how things will end up with her, but trust me, this isn’t the last you’ll see of Noreen.
. I’m really glad you liked the whole ex-boyfriend narrative. I wrote this a while ago and was finally able to intergrate it into the story to show you how bad Shannon really is. I hope it’s something people can bookmark to revisit if they’re fans.
It will be so satisfying to finally being this story to a close when the time comes, but for now, thanks for reading and check back for more!
Date: December 06 2018 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 34
I really love this story, and I especially love the emerging rivalry between Shannon and Sue Ann for Chris's affection. When Shannon started talking about Chris developing feelings for her, I thought again of how awesome it would be for, when Chris regains his height, to pursue Sue Ann. The only way for Shannon to get him back (and to avoid a likely arrest for what she did to Chris, is for Shannon to find a growth serum and grow to a giantess. That way she could force Chris to return to her and there is nothing Sue Ann could do to help him. Perhaps she could threaten to crush Sue Ann if Chris doesn't give in. I just think Shannon's playful, jealous, and sometimes cruel nature would make for a perfect giantess!
Author's Response: I will say that the whole Shannon as an evil giantess situation does interest me. The next time I post a reader challenge, submit your vote again and encourage others to vote also and maybe you might win.