Review 69! Let’s go!

Man, this was a long chapter! I think you could’ve made 2 chapters with this much content.

I think I’m going to look at this chapter again as I make this review. I already forgot the beginning, haha.

What I like about this story, and especially this chapter, was how much the chapters talk to each other. It makes the scenes more memorable, rather than some narrator going “Shannon took Chris and put him in her ass. She held him and then she farted. Chris almost died, but then Shannon took him out.” Yep, much better with actual dialogue.

Loved the scene where Chris just climbed her effortlessly. It shows a new side of Chris that I haven’t seen before. Of course, then Shannon pins Chris right after and there we see the Chris we all enjoy, the feeling of helplessness as Shannon smothers him.

I also, enjoyed the scene where Shannon and Chris are just calmly watching a movie, but Shannon insists they cuddle together. Well, we all know wha happens then. Things escalate and they get kinky.

Then all of a sudden Shannon takes off her panties and I couldn’t help but wonder like Chris, if Shannon was actually going to have sex with Chris. Chris being much bigger now, his dick might actually be decent enough to use. Turns out, it’s too small for Shannon and she just wants to sit on him naked. Nice twist.

Then after Chris was assualted by Shannon’s ass, he leaves and locks himself in his room. I forgot he was 2 feet tall at the moment, so I was initially surprised that he just went to his room without help. Of course, this didn’t last long since Shannon broke the door and decides to shrink him.

I love how the whole situation enfolded. She breaks in his room, and straddles Chris. She basically rides him and scissors him with her legs. Shannon should’ve known how to tie Chris’s hands up or atleast pin him with her legs. A simple schoolgirl pin would’ve worked. Her knees pinning his arms while her butt sits on his chest or face if she desires. That was her one error. She could have pinned him better.

Then Shannon states that only 1 or 2 drops are needed, but multiple drops get swallowed by Chris and we know he is shrinking. I’m kinda disappointed that Chris is shrinking, because he was small for 30 chapters already. I know, 30 chapters.

The only upside to this is that hopefully Rachel’s mom or Noreen get their hands on him while he is tiny too. I know I gave my suggestion when Chris was around 2 feet, but if Chris was in the other giantess’s hands while he is smaller, that would be awesome. Imagine Chris stuck in the front of Rachel’s mom’s panties. Personally, I find that erotic, but then again, it seems to be a long shot. It would be funny to see Chris imagine Rachel and her mom as saviors, but actually they have other plans too.

Or maybe this was all a dream. Hard to predict anything with this new size change and we don’t even know his new size.

Well, Part 1 is over, but I hope part 2 is soon. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well, your right about a few things: I didn’t expect this chapter—or this whole story for that matter—to be so long. What started as a small, multi-chapter story, has turned into a huge novel. The reason this chapter was longer than normal, and delayed, was because I made a last minute change and chose to be true to my word about this chapter being the end of part 1. Basically, I had thought about Chris interacting with someone else while at two feet tall, but I couldn’t get my idea to work. This ”reshrinkage” was always part of my plan, and I’m really glad you liked how this chapter turned out. But be ready, there will be a few surprises in the next couple of upcoming chapters (I think you’ll enjoy the next chapter particularly well). And I will tell you that there’s plenty of more trouble Chris could to get into....with other giantesses. Check back for future updates. Also, stay tuned for 1 or 2 single chapter stories and review them in the meantime. One other thing I’d like to ask is your permission to use your idea with Chris and Mrs. Carson with him at toddler size as an alternate chapter. I’ll do a little cleaning up for the final product. Let me know!