[Report This]Date: October 18 2018 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
Ok, being honest. The best part was when Chris was thinking about the other giantesses. I know that right now Shannon is the focus, but I kinda despise her sort of in the same way that Chris wants to escape her.
I love how you mention that Noreen seems like a good choice and I absolutely loved how Chris described Mrs. Carson as a reasonable woman. That makes me excited to see Chris with her!
One thing that stood out to me was how Shannon is collecting times when she had to help Chris. Then she says “you owe me” and I love how Shannon uses that excuse to demand favors from Chris. It’s funny because he needs her and she is independent. So ultimately, Chris has to serve Shannon just to live with her. Hot.
I’m a little sad you mentioned that the conclusion to part 1 is next week. I really want to get to some of the other giantesses soon, and I really am glad you tease me with these thoughts from Chris about them.
You also wanted to know which was my favorite chapters in your story notes and I think you already know my favorite one. It’s when Noreen had Chris stuck in her panties. That was one of the hottest chapters I have seen on this site and I like to reread it here and there. Hopefully another chapter like that comes soon.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Alright, let’s take this one paragraph at a time: I’m really glad you liked the foreshadowing of Chris with other giantesses. I figured it would be a good way to keep the other characters in the story fresh since it’s been a while since we’ve seen any of them.
The current chapters are meant to give you insight on just what kind of person Shannon is: manipulative, sensual, playful, teasing, etc. so simply want to drive home that she’s not some fat, ugly women who’s taking care of Chris—There’s really nothing sexy about that—she is someone who is attractive in her own right, or else she couldn’t get Chris to do anything sexual with her. It’s her personality that Chris hates, and I want to impart those feelings onto the readers. I hope that gives you a little insight to her character: her role is the “domineering giant woman”.
As for saying that the next chapter is the end of part 1, don’t take it to mean it’s going to be months before another chapter; far from it! It’s meant to several purposes:
1) It’s a separation between the two halves of the week in the story
2) The writing style of the next half of the story will shift a bit: there’s going to be some jumping back and forth between Characters as how they pertain to the main focus of the story.
3) I’m still actively writing this story and will still post regularly, but I also have some shorter 1-off stories that I’ve been working with on and off for the past few months, so keep your eyes out for those and review them as well.
I’m really glad you liked the Noreen interactions. That particular scenario is one of several apparently “unique” scenarios of mine that I’ve rarely or never seen at all on this or other similar sites. Trust me, I have several more unique scenarios coming up in this and other stories, so keep reading.
I also want to personally thank you for reading and reviewing my story. It’s nice to get feedback you know if people actually like what I post. Otherwise I might feel like I’m wasting my time.
So, in a nutshell, thanks for reading, and keep an eye out for my other stories.