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Reviewer: wisecrack3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2018 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oooo, I'm excited for the next chapter, hope Chris decides to willingly play in her Australian Jungle



Author's Response: I can tell you that the next chapter will be long and detailed. Does that help?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 26

Wow, I completely forgot about Sue Ann. I don’t think I care much for her anymore. She was a good memory while it lasted. The reminders help, but I think it might be more interesting if Chris has memories of other giantesses besides Shannon or Sue Ann. (I can’t believe I’m saying this, haha).

Chris’s love for feet feels very strange. Sure, he is bigger, but I don’t get how a little size boost just makes him like Shannon’s feet like that.

All the vore fans must have gotten a kick out of this chapter, I mean, that was pretty incredible. The use of the 3rd person narration right there. Shannon just teasing Chris about what she might do to him. I wish more stories would do this. If there is something that a giantess thinks about, but isn’t willing to do, I would love to see her express her ideas, either to the audience, or even better, the tiny guy, which is why you did. I love this type of stuff.

Also, if Chris is going to grow up every chapter, could you mention how tall he is? I believe he is 2 inches now, but I’m not sure. This helps me imagine how Chris interacts with a giantess.

Anyways, glad to see you are back. I see the next 2 chapters are with Shannon, so I’m hoping Chris gets some more action for other giantesses soon.

As for suggestions, hard to say. I loved that Noreen workout chapter and that is hard to beat. There is the toddler size coming up, but we know that will take a while. Hmm. I guess I would suggest that another giantess has some fun with Chris before he reaches toddler size. But if Toddler size is soon, then I wouldn’t mind.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I’m glad you liked the vore narration; I think it cements just how much Shannon likes to tease Chris, plus I think there might be more of this in later chapters. I’ll try to do a better job of detailing how tall Chris is at each stage, as it will be important for the next few chapters. There will be other giantesses besides Shannon in the rest of the story, I just have to get there: gotta keep the story interesting. I can’t put everything into this story, but remember, I’m still planning some “alternative chapters” once the story concludes; plus, this won’t be my only story. I have a few more multi-chapter stories and short stories for the future, so follow me on this site to be kept in the loop. As always, thanks for reading.

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