[Report This]Date: August 14 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 23
I have to admit. The Noreen passing out and believing that Chris being tiny is a dream is very clever. It is a solution that makes sense and continues what you want in your story.
Although, I could argue that Noreen could demand that Shannon shows Chris, and not through some FaceTime, but from face to face and Noreen could see her proof. Well, I think Noreen wouldn't think becuase realistically it would seem silly that Chris would be shrunk.
I like Chris's thoughts about Rachel. Makes me wonder if her mom would show up soon since Noreen won't be in the picture anymore. Or Sue Ann, that's her name. Almost forgot.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked the whole “convincing Noreen it was a dream” solution. Realistically, would YOU honestly believe that someone had actually been shrunk?! As for Rachel, Mrs. Carson, and Sue Ann; don’t worry, they’ll show up, just not quite yet. But be patient, they’ll be there soon enough.
Date: August 13 2018 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Another great chapter! I really enjoy the changing personal dynamic between Shannon and Chris. Perhaps to show him how much she cares, she can put together a growth serum to get him back to normal, but when Chris finds a way to get to Sue Ann, Shannon, in jealousy, uses the serum herself to grow.
I know you don't do growth stories, but I think Shannon's personality and personal dynamic with Chris would be heightened (no pun intended) and play perfectly with her becoming an actual giantess. Would really be amazing and open a whole world of plot development opportunities. Just want to suggest, and thanks again for writing!
Author's Response: I think the reason that I don’t do a lot of giantess growth stories is because I tend to be a bit more intimate with my scenarios; you know, not trying to involve too many people. But it’s something I can consider for the future.