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Reviewer: thewarmth Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2018 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 21

Another great chapter, I love the unaware interactions with Noreen. Id love to see a tie along chapter from Chris's POV!



Author's Response: The thought had crossed my mind, but I’m trying to move the story along and backtracking would only slow me down. However, I think I can appease you; I’ve got another unaware interaction with Noreen up my sleeve. 😉. Thanks for reading and for the review!

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

Aww, I was hoping for more unaware.

Author's Response: Don’t worry, still plenty more of that come, I guarantee it! 🤗

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2018 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yes! Noreen finds Chris! I'm so excited!

I understand you are not sure where to go with this. Perhaps, I can help with some ideas.

-Noreen realizes that Chris felt nice on her foot and decides to keep him to play with.

-Chris explains his side of the story feeling embarrassed and Noreen can't help but feel horny thinking of what Chris went through.

-Noreen decides to hang on to Chris and also tells Shannon that she will keep her secret as long Noreen gets some time with Chris.

-Noreen realizes that she never really wanted a man, but instead wanted some pleasure which Chris can provide.

-Shannon explains Chris's shrinking and how she lost him during their meeting outside. She is reluctant to tell Noreen about what she does to Chris, but Noreen brings up some naughty ideas which allows Shannon to openly share her methods.

-Shannon tells Noreen that she will take Chris off her hands, but Noreen seems excited and decides to hold on to Chris and let Shannon relax.

-Both Noreen and Shannon talk about what to do with Chris, while Chris is shaking his head "no" at each idea they come up with while the ladies smile in agreement.

Yeah, most of these ideas are similar and I might come up with more. I just want to see Noreen play with Chris.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I will definitely take your suggestions under advisement. My take on Noreen is that although she and Shannon are good friends, Noreen isn’t mean by any sense, so I don’t think she would knowingly torture Chris. It is possible that if she can understand the situation, however, she might be a bit playful. I want her reaction to Chris’s predicament to be realistic, I mean how would a real person react to seeing someone tiny, something that never happens in real life. Their reaction would probably be a mixture of disbelief and confusion, possibly wanting to know more about how it happened. You also look at things from Chris’s perspective: Now that the secret’s out, and since Shannon has put him through Quite a bit, he probably admit several things and hide others about what Shannon’s done to him, and beg Noreen to keep him safe until he gets big again. I want this next chapter to be as realistic as possible as far as how each character would most likely react: Noreen’s disbelief, Chris’s anxiety about her intentions and his eagerness to be kept out of danger, and Shannon’s fears about Chris being discovered. I think the key will be finding the right balance of caring and playfulness, if it’s possible.

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