Chris! Why did you leave her vagina?! First, its sexy. Second, it's your best method of getting Noreen's attention and he blew it. Hopefully, this is just a way of having Shannon leave before Noreen finds Chris. If Noreen found Chris, she probably would have given him back to Shannon and we know we can't have that anytime soon.

Noreen is super sexy. Love how she toys with Chris and her body seems to act on its own, just playing with him. It's like Noreen said "ok pussy, enjoy!" and she feeds Chris to it.

So it seems that Noreen has stepped on Chris. Now Chris is super sticky, so he could possibly be stuck under her foot as she walks back to Shannon. Or Chris is stuck to her bath mat, and Noreen returns for her shower and disrobes over him, her panties falling in him and he gets stuck to it. Then afterward, she puts it on with Chris inside. (Bit of a stretch, right?)

These unaware scenes are good, but I'm absolutely excited about Noreen finding Chris. You do a great job writing the dialogue and interactions between characters, especially Shannon and Chris, and I would love to see some of that with Noreen and Chris.

Wow, I'm impressed by Shannon's creativity to create a distraction while she looks. Asking for some medication, haha! Then Chris caused the ultimate distraction, by escaping. I love how Noreen loves Chris inside her and gets upset when Chris starts escaping. So comical, yet so sexy.

Noreen works out pretty much every part of her body, doesn't she? Well, maybe her vaginal muscles need a workout too, and Chris provides the best gym equipment for that workout.

Noreen has easily become the best part of this story, even better than the first girl whom I have forgotten the name since she was there for 1 chapter and then a dream. Well, I'm glad Noreen has introduced to this story. She is sexy and fit and her ambition to get things done makes me excited. I am anxious for her to discover Chris and I can only what she will do to him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Along with yours, I have received very positive feedback on the Noreen chapters; I’m so glad many people liked it! I had outlined how this whole scenario with Noreen would end, but all the feedback is at least making me reconsider some things. If Noreen does find Chris, it’s going to be quite be awkward situation, and Shannon will have a lot of explaining to do. As always, thanks for your feedback!