[Report This]Date: July 16 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Incredible story so far and this chapter brings it to a whole new level. Cant wait for the next!
Author's Response: I’m glad to hear you liked it; I’ve received very positive feedback from this chapter. There are a few more “unique” scenarios that I’d like to include in this and future stories. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 13 2018 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Nice chapter. Hope Chris ended up inside Noreen's Womb, especially if he starts to grow back inside her womb (I know it's not a true unbirth, but I really do love unbirth stories especially with male to female unbirth and ones with people trapped inside wombs), If he does grow back inside her womb, I hope for several funny moments trying to get him out with him being to big by then, maybe even have to find a way to shrink him again, and get to continue the story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I’ll take your suggestion under consideration.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was ridiculously sexy!
I loved the yoga parts. You do a great job at describing those yoga positions, and I could easily see Noreen performing them. It made Chris's situation much more clear.
Of course, we got a cliffhanger this time. Noreen opens her legs wide and Chris falls inside! Then Noreen felt herself up and couldn't find him! Chris must be trapped deep inside her, those muscles holding him in place, preventing him from moving, and therefore, Noreen doesn't feel him. That's hot.
Even after just 2 chapters, I love Noreen much more than Shannon. Her fitness program makes me envy how Chris is enduring all this.
Please tell me that Shannon doesn't find Chris for long. Or at least Noreen gets to have lots of fun before Shannon arrives. Or even better, Noreen hides Chris when Shannon arrives!
I like how you said Noreen won't take too kindly about finding Chris in her panties. Hmm. Maybe she will punish him by keeping him in there.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I’ve been wanting to do a chapter like this in a story for a long time, and when I chose to bring Noreen into the story, it provided the perfect opportunity. I tried to make it as sexy and stimulating as possible, with enough detail to describe the exact situation so as not to just nonchalantly skim over it. I have several more scenarios that I’ve been wanting to include and these will require characters other than just Shannon as well, meaning that Noreen may not be the only other person Chris has a run in with, but that’s all I’ll say for now. I hope the next couple of chapters will also be to your liking.