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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2018 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

Nice chapter. I'm hoping that Chris has a while before growing back, and after spending some time with Unaware Noreen, ends up with someone else unaware, before Shannon can find him.

Author's Response: There’s still going to be some time with Chris in his shrunken state, along with some fun as he starts to grow back to normal!

Reviewer: redeyes98 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

This was an awesome chapter I can’t wait to see the next.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Stay tuned for more.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

Best chapter yet! I love it!

Thank you for uploading this chapter, it's been a while since any of my favorite authors posted something lately so I'm glad you filled in that gap.

This is no ordinary chapter, it was long and fruitful. It felt as if I was reading a story within another story. I loved the effort you put into this chapter, not just the length, but also the references.

Thank you for the Sue Ann dream! Just the mention of Sue Ann would make this chapter already on of my favorites. I would have been happy with that alone, but then you exceeeded my expectations!

Noreen just made me fall in love! A smoking hot fit woman who is mature enough to respect her body and in her 30's meaning that her body is completely full. Love the mention of wide hips, my favorite trait of a woman. I love the look of wide hips on fit woman. It stands out and is attractive to me.

I love the dream sequence, from Sue Ann to Shannon to Noreen. I'm glad it ended with the panties of Noreen, what a goddess! Noreen also has wide hips so Chris will easily slide in between her legs to settle by her crotch.

I still don't know how it's possible for Chris to slide into Noreen's tight spandex and then into her panties, but I won't complain because it's the sexiest position to be in.

Then she mentioned that she was going to finish her run and afterward, do some yoga? Amazing! I hope Chris remains trapped in the crotch of her panties for her entire workout or hopefully the rest of the day. Imagine Noreen doing some splits with her crotch swallowing up Chris.

I have no idea why Chris is panicking. Noreen is sexy! Also she babysat Chris before so it's not like she is a complete stranger. Chris was in fear of Noreen finding him like this, but I am in fact excited! I want Noreen to discover him eventually and then have naughty thoughts about treating Chris similarly to Shannon, although I prefer Noreen to be that horny woman who is eager to find a man so she decides to use Chris for some pleasure. The only thing missing is for Noreen to tied up Chris to the front of her panties so he faces her pussy and then go about her workout and the rest of the day with Chris trapped inside.

I wish I was in Chris's position so bad! I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your loyal readership....and your review. I think you’ll be pleasantly surprised with the next chapter. I’ll post it as soon as I can!

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