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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2018 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well, we know Chris ain't dying so I'm not worried about him going down Shannon's throat.

Kinda silly how Shannon just weaves in this sexual play while they already agreed no to do any of this again. Also, Chris keeps getting hypnotized by her boobs. Calm down boy. You already saw them before. Lol.

My prediction is that Shannon is faking the whole thing. She probably knows he is in her mouth and is just scaring the crap out of him. She probably will suck all the ice cream off him and then suck on him some more.

Like what cheese said, I'm still anxious for the Sue Ann return. She got me interested in this story, and I hope she makes an appearance soon.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for being an avid reader! Always happy to see your reviews.

Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2018 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Nice chapter. I hope Chris gets a full tour of Shannons digestive system, but remains alive the whole trip, only to be found after coming ouy the other end. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: I try to shoot for some amount of realism in my stories, so if Chris gets swallowed, he’s a goner!

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