Rachel is 13, right? It's funny, but my mind keeps trying to sexualize her which is messing my imagination up. She just had to sit on Chris.

Also, where did Rachel come from? I thought Sue Ann was next and this girl shows up. Perhaps Rachel will convince Shannon to flee and Sue Ann shows up. I'm not sure.

Well, now I have no idea where this story is going, but at least it's kinda entertaining.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: What I will say is this: Ordinarily, I wouldn’t use characters so young in my stories unless the other characters were also similar ages, but since these characters were created by someone else, I had to work with what I was given. In retrospect, I could have just created my own unique characters in the same situation, but the story may not have been believable; besides, hindsight is 20/20. Chris is 13, So I needed someone of similar age range for the story. It will all come full circle and hopefully make sense in the end. I know I’m keeping everybody in great suspense, but that’s the fun of it; I keep everyone thirsting for more....Well, OK. One spoiler: Sue Ann WILL DEFINITELY be in the story, but that’s all I will say for now. Keep checking back, I’ll return in April after my spring break!