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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2018 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

I loved the whole swimming idea. It was nice that Shannon is putting some effort to keep Chris entertained. The slide is creative. Using a straw cut open for him. I like it.

I have always liked the amount of dialogue you have in this story. Both Shannon and Chris talk a lot which is what I wish most stories would have. Usually, most stories just have a narrator tells us the story which is boring. Glad you made this interesting.

I think the part where Shannon displayed her naked body to him was hilarious. It truly shows what kinda character she is and how she feels about Chris.

Shannon is getting better, but I still miss Sue Ann.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I’m still actively writing new chapters for this and other stories, so anything is possible. I might even take some suggestions under advisement😉. I appreciate your feedback and loyal readership. I’ll have a surprise for everyone next week, so stay tuned!

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