Date: March 19 2020 11:20 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Hey! I just wanted to check in to see if you were still planning on an alternate ending for this. I really enjoy your writing and miss the characters of the story. Plus, Shannon would make a great giantess...hope all is well, and I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: While I AM planning on one last alternate chapter with Shannon as a giantess, it is, unfortunately, on indefinite hold. I’ve hit a block as far as the outline and how I want events to flow, and as giantess growth stories aren’t my strong suit, I’d rather wait to produce quality content rather than write a sub-standard chapter, which will most likely be a lengthy one. As ideas come to me, I will jot them down, but I’ve taken a short break from writing for now due to work and other personal projects. I would like to revisit this story in the future, but for now, until I at least get an outline completed, its on hiatus.
Date: January 13 2020 12:18 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Hi! I just wanted to see if you were still planning an alternate chapter for your story. I'm not sure if that is in the near future or months away. If not, it's still easily one of the best stories on here! Thanks again for writing!
Author's Response: I do have one last alternate chapter in the works, but it’s been slow going and I’ve also got other projects I’m actively working on. I’m working on it on and off, but it will probably be several months before it’s finished.
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 5:50 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Great story! In addition to the epilogue, I expect a full 500-chapter story from the alternate Chapter 10 within the next two weeks. Thanks!
Author's Response: Truth be told, I really like the thought of Chris and Rachel, too. I don’t mind having something going on between two young teenagers of the same age, I just feel a little uncomfortable writing intimate encounters involving characters that young. I’m not saying that I won’t use young characters, but I normally careful about how far I take things. That being said, I’m glad you enjoyed that chapter, but if I had to do over again I probably would’ve made Chris and Rachel a little older.
Date: December 23 2019 11:45 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Another quick idea for the alternate ending could include Rachel growing giant to fight the already gigantic Shannon. There's really a lot of fun to be had with this alternate storyline, and Shannon makes a perfect giantess. Hopefully it will be a long chapter as there's a lot to explore, and I'm so happy you're doing it!
[Report This]Date: December 23 2019 11:44 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
What A Wonderful End to the Story! I've been reading since the Beginning and I've loved every chapter.
Well done man! Hope for some more gentle based stories from you! Really l looking forward to that epilogue!
Merry Christmas Mate! And a Happy New Year!
Ps. I've been wanting to do some writing of my own. Dont suppose you have some good tips for a first time writer?
Author's Response: Thank you for your readership. As for advice, I would suggest starting with short stories, then listening to reader feedback as far as how to proceed. Obviously, take all comments in stride, but write what you like. One last piece of advice: always make sure to check your grammar!
Date: December 13 2019 12:26 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
If the durability of nose end elbow compensates each other and shrunken size then its a question of force still? Does the shrunken condition also increases the strenght of the body proportional to the increased durability? If so then shrunken Chris, Sue Ann, Shannon and Ray should be as strong as an Ant in compare to the size or something, if not Shannon´s nose and Sue Ann´s elbow should simply be so solid that both are unable to cause each other any harm.
Author's Response: Well, obviously I wouldn’t pick apart every detail, as then we’d have to discuss the realities of a person actually shrinking. Let’s just call it a question of force: the force and density of the elbow was able to overcome the increased strength and density of the nose. Think “Ant Man”: when he punches, the force of his punch applied over such a small area means his punch is like a bullet. When he and Yellow Jacket fought, they certainly could hurt each other.
Date: December 05 2019 9:21 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
I've Been following this story since the beginning. And I'm really hoping for a happy ending for Chris,Sue Ann and Rachel. I would prefer if chris was grown back to normal so he could be happy with Rachel.
Please dont let anything bad happen to the good Characters!!!!
Feel Free to punish shannon all you want though. Hehehe
This is my first ever review sorry if it sucks.
Author's Response: Well, first let me say: Congrats on your first review.
A happy ending is certainly one possibility, but so is a sad ending. I’m sure you’ll enjoy the ending I have planned; I’ve been waiting to write it for almost 2 years now.
Date: November 19 2019 12:45 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
This is easily my favorite story on the site! Thank you for updating it often! Honestly I’m really hoping for Shannon to win, I love the way she uses Chris and Ray. My perfect ending to the story would be Shannon getting away with it and forever using her boy toys for her pleasure. (And if that’s not the ending you want I definitely think you should write an alternate chapter where that’s the case) but up to you thanks for the story.
Author's Response: I’ve been toying around with multiple endings, along with how the last alternate chapter’s going to go, so you might just get your wish. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 6:40 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
COME ON! COME ON! Chris never gets a break, Racheal even after he's saved plays a bit rough with him, then he gets spurned by the older woman and then Shannon screws (or atleast tries to) him over. Not that her plan would remotely work in real life as Rachel and her mother will likely point how Shannon had him there for a week and never called the cops, would not let them into the house and how she claimed he was sick. How do those remotely point to Sue Ann kidnapping him?
I mean really give the kid a break, you spend DOZENs of chapters tormenting him give him three of 'lighter' torment, have Shannon and Ray get jusctice done. Have Rachel and Chris have their happy ending, let the suffering END! Thank you.
Author's Response: I know that it’s frustrating to see Shannon seemingly winning all the time, and I also understand your dubious belief in her plan; actually, that’s the point. Her plan is unbelievable: SHE thinks it’ll work because she’s blinded by her ambition and isn’t thinking clearly. She’s basically making it up as she goes.
I wanted to share Shannon’s day, but I honestly wasn’t expecting it to take up the whole chapter—I was only expecting it to take up maybe a couple of pages—Plus, I was hoping to end the chapter later on into the night, but by the time she and Chris began their confrontation, the chapter was already 7-pages long, and I personally don’t like to spend an entire chapter where you’re waiting to see the conflict start being resolved to be filled with a bunch of back story that barely moves the main plot along, so, sorry about that. But, I assure you, the story is coming up on its conclusion, and I plan on the next chapter having some real excitement!
Date: October 04 2019 4:17 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
I could have sworn I read back door the first time I read it. Hmm. Maybe I saw Shannon saying door and my mind put the “back” part in there. I never heard someone say front door for that purpose. I thought people just say sex for the vagina and backdoor for ass. Hmm. Alright.
Ohhh! Now I know why I thought Chris has grown so big. I got the alternate chapter mixed up since he grew a lot in that chapter with Mrs Carson. (I read it multiple times. Not my fault it’s so good. Lol)
Author's Response: I double checked: it definitely says “front door”. It may not really be a saying; I was just trying to convey Shannon being coy.
I’m really glad you liked my take on your idea for the alternate chapter with Mrs. Carson; it was quite the undertaking getting it just right. In the future, however, I will make sure to reiterate how big Chris gets as the potion wears off to avoid any confusion (especially in the next chapter).
Date: September 13 2019 4:28 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Can't wait to see what Shannon is up to and still looking forward to the giantess chapters! Hopefully Rachel and Sue Ann can have a little fun with Chris before Shannon returns too!
Author's Response: If you recall, Shannon hatched a plan to keep Chris shrunk....permanently, and has captured and shrunk the scientist who invented the formula; you’ll soon see what else she’s been up to.
As far as the Giantess Shannon scenario, I’ve been brainstorming and have a few ideas. You’ll just have to wait and see.
As for Sue Ann and Rachel, you must keep in mind that they care for Chris and wouldn’t do anything to intentionally hurt him. However, despite how careful they are, “accidents” are bound to happen. Plus, they might find an opportunity to be a little “playful” with regards to his situation.
Remember, Chris has feelings for BOTH Sue Ann AND Rachel. He’s always been sweet on Sue Ann, and he’s just now coming to terms over his true feelings for Rachel too. And seeing them both as giants might awake other feelings as well, so stay tuned.
Date: August 06 2019 7:14 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Can't wait for more! I really hope Chris is found soon and Shannon finally finds a growth formula to become a giantess!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I think you’ll find the next chapter quite enjoyable, and I’m sure you’ll like what I have planned for Shannon.
Date: August 05 2019 10:30 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Wow. Haha. I took so long to write that review that I now see the other responses to the reviews just now.
So, I see you stated that you have the rest of the story all planned out. I’m curious. Does this mean you know what happens each chapter, or does this mean which path does Chris take? No need to give me every detail, but I had the impression that you are going to make this story longer and that’s why Chris wasn’t discovered or grown yet.
Now you mention that it’s almost over which makes me worried a bit. Will there be action scenes with a bigger Chris? Or will he be tiny at this size the rest of the way and grow back to normal at the end? It’s just, I remember a while back (I think over a year ago), I made a suggestion about a scene with Mrs. Carson and Chris while Chris was at 2 ft tall. You then asked permission to use it which I approved and since then Chris hasn’t grown even close to 2 ft or even 1 ft tall. So now I wonder if that scene will even happen.
You also mention that you want this story to be finished as soon as possible, but part of me wants it to last forever. (Lol, I think we all want erotic stories to last forever).
I don’t think people want this story to end, but rather to get to the good parts. You say you have competed the story, but I think you can squeeze in some sexy chapters here and there.
Well, that’s what I believe you are telling us in this previous responses. If it is indeed going to end soon, I hope it ends with a bang, literally. Let’s have Chris bang someone for the finale. Lol.
I would like to know your thoughts, that’s all.
Author's Response: I don’t know the exact details of the remaining chapters, but I know the major plot points that will be hit. I won’t give away anything right now, but I have made some changes along the way, with some major ones yet to come thanks to reviews and suggestions. Don’t worry, there’s plenty of good stuff to come!
There’s still plenty to come, but I’m pretty sure the remaining story will be less than 10 chapters at the most, hopefully. As far as Mrs. Carson goes, you might want to reread the parts where we see her in this chapter, and pay close attention to what she’s doing in the next one as well, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
I have other erotic stories I want to get to, with new and interesting characters and scenarios, so I want to move on from this story.
Date: August 05 2019 7:09 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
As one of my previously-favorite stories on the site, I'm disheartened. Please take all the criticism you've been recieiving in stride but know that next time, these extraordinarily long arcs with no sensible direction are very frustrating and should be avoided in the next story. All I've wanted for the past ... 25 pages is for rachel to have discovered chris and do a continuation of the glimmer we say in the alternative chapter 10.
Your writing is wonderful, your scenery is vivid and exciting, but your plot development leaves me out of breathe to read any further.
Author's Response: Yes, I understand I’ve let you down. Right now, it’s too late to change anything, and I’m not planning on revisiting or revising this story one it’s completed. This story has made me rethink my writing in future projects moving forward, and I have certainly learned a lot from this experience. I implore you to check back and read future chapters as we are approaching the end, and things are going to change from here on out. I was hoping to have a major plot twist this week, but the chapter started getting long, so I cut it short. Thanks for reading.
Date: July 20 2019 11:02 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Seems like we've been here before, Chris yelling and screaming, being in dangerous situations and no one able to hear (but Chloe the dog and no one is really paying her any attention either).
It does seem Rachel does have feelings for Chris and that Mrs. Carson is worried about him as well, but it seems like there is a BRICK wall beteewn that worry and actual action against Shannon. Every benefit seems to go Shannon's way...
Hoping Rachel and Chris get a happy ending and that for once on this board Karma is repaid to the story's villian.
Thank you.
Author's Response: You aren’t the first person to comment on the repetitiveness of several of these past few chapters, but I assure you, things are soon going to come to fruition. We are definitely approaching the end of the story: the week is winding down and Shannon is already under suspicion from several people. She can’t keep up her charade forever, nor will Chris stay small for much longer. It’s only a matter of time before the truth comes out, possibly even sooner than you think. I’m sure that most readers will enjoy the ending, and the other surprises I have in store.
Date: June 29 2019 7:56 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Kind of been reading in the background, seems we see the two exteremes of GMing. Monty Hall for Shannon (come on if your son had been sick for a week and hadn't been seen or gone to the doctors you would be on the first thing back and would of called the cops to search the house), which every benefit of the doubt swings her way, every resource is a$$ pulled to help her while Chris is a Paladin who can only make desperate thrid way choices (are you going to murder orc childern or let the town die equivllent) aka killer dungeon GM for Chris.
Would like it if it this was reversed at the end and there was consequences for Shannon evil deeds (bad like prision) and some reward for Chris (like him and Racheal becoming 'better' friends).
Just my view on a decent story.
Author's Response: I appreciate your honesty. I didn’t realize how long this story was going to be when I started out; I just had so much I wanted to have happen in a relatively short amount of time, that I probably ended up sacrificing the overall believability of and interest in the plot. This is why I’m trying to move things along as we approach the end of the story. We’re coming up on the end of the week and we’ve seen that Shannon is now under suspicion; with Mrs. Carson, Rachel, Sue Ann, and Mrs. Martin all closing in on the truth, Shannon is becoming more and more desperate to keep her secret, and pull off her great escape!
Date: June 26 2019 5:26 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Just catching up on this one, good so far. Hoping there is a happy ending for Chris (with Rachel!). Kind of expecting he will be shrunk, and tortured by Shannon if thats the case tell me now and I will STOP READING. Evidently every writer on this site has the villian get away scott free while the guy who's a decent person is either punished or killed and if thats how this stroy is ending I would prefer to be my time in more productive avenues.
Maybe Rachel could find him and the antidote, have Chris wig out a bit (not sure it's and antidote) Rachel tests it, she cures him, Shannon and Ray get their just deserts while Rachel starts to grow and devolp much faster and further then she should...
Good story so far, thank you.
Author's Response: I AM planning on resolving all of the story’s conflicts in the end, but I won’t reveal just how yet. I am also a fan of happy endings....when the story calls for them. I will certainly take your suggestions into consideration. For now, thanks for reading.
Date: May 17 2019 3:29 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Awesome to hear you were also thinking along the giantess Shannon line. Given her mix of cockiness and playfulness, I could see a giantess Shannon initially act as if she were going to teach Chris a lesson for escaping her...possibly with a demonstration of her power which would depend on her size. I could also see her playful side coming out by letting Chris climb her now titanic feet or playing with buildings between her toes. Perhaps another storyline is Chirs escapes her once again as she terrorizes the city. Maybe he and Rachel try to escape Shannon by sailing away on a large ship or cruise ship when suddenly Shannon attacks the ship approaching from underneath the water and uses the ship as her toy. There are an endless supply of strong storylines once you open it to Shannon becoming a giantess because her character and persona are ideal for it!
Author's Response: Thanks for your input. I’ll do some brainstorming and put together an outline. If you have any more suggestions, let me know.
Date: May 15 2019 4:46 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
I really hope Rachel or someone finds and helps him grow back to normal size and together they plot to bring Shannon to justice, but just as they form a plan Shannon shows up giant in size. I'd love for her to figure out how to grow herself to 500 or 1000 feet to find and continue to torment Chris (and a whole city) as Shannon demeanor makes her a perfect giantess!
Author's Response: I actually agree with you that Shannon would make a perfect giantess, so I think what I’m going to do is work on some outlines for an alternative chapter where Shannon grows. I have a few ideas circling around in my head for how it would play out, but I would certainly appreciate some suggestions. If you have any ideas on what she should do, anything you’d like to see, or even have a few scenes that you’ve thought out, feel free to leave a comment or message me.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2019 8:41 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Really enjoying the story! I’m hoping Rachel finds Chris, the alternate chapter 10 was great.
Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you liked the alternate chapter, and I guarantee it won’t be the only one. 😉
Rachel is integral to the story, and you’ll see just how when it all wraps up.