[Report This]Date: December 08 2023 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn Ariel, I was all with up until you murdering your own sibling (fratricide).... and his friend in a girl's foot sweat. Lol! Thought she was supposed to be teaching them a life lesson not to look down on others. Not send them a Helldom.
Love the story, tho. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: December 08 2023 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Damn Ariel, I was all with up until you murdering your own sibling (fratricide).... and his friend in a girl's foot sweat. Lol! Thought she was supposed to be teaching them a life lesson not to look down on others. Not send them a Helldom.
Love the story, tho. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: July 27 2018 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 14
That was dark, even by the standards of most of your dark and violent stories.
I wonder if Ariel realizes she probably doomed herself to hell. Since heaven was real in this setting.
I also wonder how mortal magic can deny people heaven .
Author's Response:
The mandate on this one from the commissioner was to go very dark. The magic's a bit of a "eh, who knows" situation in this story.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
That is some meta-shit right there.
Quality ending.
Author's Response:
Hopefully in the best way
Date: June 30 2018 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the story, the way you write is amazing. Though I was wondering if Mary is gonna get shrunk later on aswell
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. Mary is lucky enough that Ariel sympathizes with her, so she's off the hook
Date: June 12 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hopefully more is coming soon! This is quickly becoming my favorite story you've written.
Author's Response:
Yep, more will go up soon
Date: May 30 2018 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
The last chapter was amazing, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks much!
Date: May 18 2018 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
thank you for the amazing latest chapter
Author's Response:
Sure. More will be up soon.
Date: May 09 2018 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story and very well written.
Your a true asset for the gts community.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: May 08 2018 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Will you be continuing Time Out ?
Author's Response:
I expect so, but it's hard to say when, since I've sort of shifted focus over to commissions work this year
[Report This]Date: May 08 2018 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Love your writing style and how you use the concept of magic to push your characters. My favourite so far was the curse on Nina, amazing!
Author's Response:
Glad you like it
Date: May 06 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
this just became much more interesting
Date: May 06 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was getting worried the story wouldn't continue! Amazing work as always! :D
Author's Response:
This is a commissioned work, so we'll reach the conclusion for sure.
Date: April 05 2018 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Amazing chapter, makes you feel like you are there.
Author's Response:
Thanks. More of it coming soon.
Date: April 03 2018 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Nice chapter. I wonder if Ariel is going to use the book to make Nina go through the same things David has too, as in share his fate.
Author's Response:
Entirely possible...
Date: March 21 2018 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait for the next chapter! I love how descriptive you are!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. It's coming soon
Date: March 15 2018 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm curious to see what spells you will come up with to continue torturing him! The possibilities are endless
Author's Response:
There's plenty more fun to come
[Report This]Date: March 04 2018 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
My only complaint is that the chapters aren't ever very long with these commissions. Doesn't feel like there is enough time for you to get into the descriptions and details that make your stories great. Other than that, I'm enjoying this one.
Author's Response:
The pacing on many of these commission stories is definitely different than my own non-custom ones.