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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 27 2018 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 14

That was dark, even by the standards of most of your dark and violent stories. 

 

I wonder if Ariel realizes she probably doomed herself to hell. Since heaven was real in this setting. 

 

I also wonder how mortal magic can deny people heaven . 



Author's Response:

The mandate on this one from the commissioner was to go very dark. The magic's a bit of a "eh, who knows" situation in this story.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

That is some meta-shit right there.

 

Quality ending.



Author's Response:

Hopefully in the best way

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