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Reviewer: andymich65 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 4:22 PM Title: Friends In High Places

Love it so far! Love the use of the socks! You don’t see that too often on this site.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Socks are one of my favorite things, and I was sad I didn't see it much. Im glad you enjoyed it! 

Reviewer: luckoffanddie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 11:22 PM Title: Friends In High Places

Absolutely love it! The characters feel really believable, and the power dynamic is exactly my kind of thing. This is exactly the kind of scenario I like and you've written it wonderfully, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Characters were something I never felt super confident in, so it means a lot you like them. Thank you very much for your kind words <3

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2018 1:15 AM Title: Friends In High Places

I enjoyed the start. As mentioned just space it more. Looking forward to seeing where it goes

Reviewer: Thenormalone Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 6:49 PM Title: Friends In High Places

It's looks like is gonna be a very great story keep going please💪💪

Reviewer: slavetowomen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 2:04 PM Title: Friends In High Places

Not a bad start. Very interested to see more. Word of advice though, break up the paragraphs. There is little to no spacing between them. I would turn those two paragraphs into 10 or more. Other than that, the writing style is good and the story is intriguing

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I appreciate the review. And yeah, knowing when to start a new paragraph has always been a trouble of mine, but I'll try to go back and fix it as soon as possible

 

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