Date: February 26 2018 4:22 PM Title: Friends In High Places
Love it so far! Love the use of the socks! You don’t see that too often on this site.
Thank you! Socks are one of my favorite things, and I was sad I didn't see it much. Im glad you enjoyed it!
Date: February 25 2018 11:22 PM Title: Friends In High Places
Absolutely love it! The characters feel really believable, and the power dynamic is exactly my kind of thing. This is exactly the kind of scenario I like and you've written it wonderfully, keep up the good work!
Thank you very much! Characters were something I never felt super confident in, so it means a lot you like them. Thank you very much for your kind words <3
Date: February 16 2018 2:04 PM Title: Friends In High Places
Not a bad start. Very interested to see more. Word of advice though, break up the paragraphs. There is little to no spacing between them. I would turn those two paragraphs into 10 or more. Other than that, the writing style is good and the story is intriguing
Thank you very much! I appreciate the review. And yeah, knowing when to start a new paragraph has always been a trouble of mine, but I'll try to go back and fix it as soon as possible