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Reviewer: Rise8 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2018 6:39 AM Title: Heading Home

That’s party poison by My Chemical Romance, I used to listen to them lol. Story is interesting so far can’t tell if Emma really wants to help Kevin or if she’s just using him. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: andymich65 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 4:22 PM Title: Friends In High Places

Love it so far! Love the use of the socks! You don’t see that too often on this site.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Socks are one of my favorite things, and I was sad I didn't see it much. Im glad you enjoyed it! 

Reviewer: luckoffanddie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 11:22 PM Title: Friends In High Places

Absolutely love it! The characters feel really believable, and the power dynamic is exactly my kind of thing. This is exactly the kind of scenario I like and you've written it wonderfully, keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Characters were something I never felt super confident in, so it means a lot you like them. Thank you very much for your kind words <3

Reviewer: Cameron99 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2018 1:15 AM Title: Friends In High Places

I enjoyed the start. As mentioned just space it more. Looking forward to seeing where it goes

Reviewer: Thenormalone Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 6:49 PM Title: Friends In High Places

It's looks like is gonna be a very great story keep going please💪💪

Reviewer: slavetowomen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 2:04 PM Title: Friends In High Places

Not a bad start. Very interested to see more. Word of advice though, break up the paragraphs. There is little to no spacing between them. I would turn those two paragraphs into 10 or more. Other than that, the writing style is good and the story is intriguing

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I appreciate the review. And yeah, knowing when to start a new paragraph has always been a trouble of mine, but I'll try to go back and fix it as soon as possible

 

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