[Report This]Date: October 31 2018 9:28 PM Title: Jekyll Rises
ABOUT. FUCKING. TIME! I really hope that Hyde fucking dies... but reading the chapter titles that clearly isn't the case.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2018 9:19 PM Title: Ménage à trois - Part 2
Fucking good shit. Ugh I can't get enough.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2018 8:45 PM Title: Lady Jekyll?
I have to admit I'm slightly disappointed. Was hoping to delve more into Valerie's feelings and her seriously think about what led her to save Rachel. Yet she immediately seems to have snapped back to the hyde personality and is already going to punish Rachel now that she can abuse her. Felt unrewarding I guess, though I suppose this could change in a future chapter.
And it still saddens me that she doesn't regret killing Crystal at all... Teared up a little to hear her say that.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2018 8:26 PM Title: Brought to Heel
HELL. YES.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2018 5:13 PM Title: Bouncing Here And There And Everywhere
I hope she's off to the bathroom to rescue Rachel....
[Report This]Date: October 30 2018 2:59 PM Title: ACT 3: Vini Vidi Vici
FUCK. YES.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 6:26 PM Title: Hyde Rises
If only those who eaten a person cannot be shrunk, how did half the world shrink initially? Confusing and a plot hole lol unless I'm missing something.
Love the direction it took and oh boy cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
I explain it later, but that first wave of shrinking was an accident. Things went haywire, random people shrunk, etc. When the people responsible finally made working shrink rays, at first theyd only work on people who didnt eat tinies. Hope that clears it up. Thanks for all the comments :D
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 6:08 PM Title: Caught?
Best vore story on the site. Also the plot is great. I cannot get enough.
[Report This]Date: October 23 2018 4:31 PM Title: Butt Why?
Just when I didn't think the story could get any hotter. And now theres two cruel women!? IM IN HEAVEN!!!
[Report This]Date: October 21 2018 6:18 AM Title: New Player
Oh boi Rachel and Brittany both know the truth! The more that know the more screwed Valerie gets! CRYSTAL SHALL HAVE HER JUSTICE!
Author's Response:
Indeed. It might seem like Valerie has the whole thing barely contained, even. I wonder what will happen. Hashtag justice4Crystal.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2018 3:01 PM Title: Best Laid Plans
Valerie forcing Steven against her throat as Anne was swallowed was HOT. And I'm loving the detective segments it's super cool! I cannot believe how underrated this story is it deserves far more attention!!
My heart still pains for Crystal... actually teared up by the mention of her name.
And omg I'm fantasizing hard for Valerie. God damn let that woman EAT ME!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :D And yeah. There's one part later on that really hurt me to write out. Weird how attached we get to our own characters. Hurt me right in my author-parts to write it. You'll see. And Valerie is by no means picky, if you're small enough for her to swallow then you'll be in her stomach before you know it ;)
[Report This]Date: October 20 2018 8:27 AM Title: Bye bye Little Girlfriend!
Oh God yes. Now Anne gets her turn at digestion. This is easily the hottest story I've ever read.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 8:06 PM Title: ACT 2: Two For One, Twice
Though I miss Crystal I'll say that you reinvigorated my interest with the new turn of events! Valerie is now a serial kidnapper possibly killer to boot. And investigators? Fuck yeah baby! This will be so good. Nice job bro
Author's Response:
Haha thanks :D really glad you're into it so far. I think I'm most anxious about how you critique the last set of chapters... I can't help but feel like that was where some of my weaker writing was, even though I try to put the same effort and care in every chapter.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 4:45 PM Title: Hyde's First
Holy shit... I can't believe she's gone! I have to admit that my heart breaks for her... Though I wanted it initially, the way Valerie disregarded her friends life was so indescribably cruel, that I can't help but feel a deep hatred for her.
Crystal was really making the story for me, and now that she's gone I feel empty inside :(
R.I.P. Crystal
Otherwise hot damn is Valerie a sexy deviant.
Author's Response:
She certainly is. I had mixed feelings about this chapter, since it pretty much set the story to a certain tone... but much like Valerie, if I could do it all over, I'd have Crystal's story end the same way again and again. But these first 7 chapters were always my favorite because of the dynamic these characters had, and what Valerie ended up doing with Crystal leaves some permanent repercussions to Valerie's other relationships. I feel like the story became darker as a result, but I guess that's expected given that Valerie is like sprinting down said dark path.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 4:01 PM Title: Miss Hyde
This is among the top 3 best vore moments in all the stories I've ever read. Suzy and amazing. Interesting how Crystal appears to dislike her friend entirely, makes me wonder what the toll will be on their relationship.
Also I love the whole Hyde idea of 2 persona's. Suddenly your title makes more sense ;)
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 3:43 PM Title: Butt Buddy
Damn that was hot. Great desription on the sequence in which Crystal was crushed. I really hope there's more unaware stuff with Brittany!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 3:33 PM Title: Minty Fresh
Oh boy, Brittany reminds me if my hot ex. Always had vore fantasies with her, and she had great feet too. This is awesome!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 3:19 PM Title: Sweet Dreams
Valerie is the epitome of what I desire in a giantess. Only makes me love this story that much more. Ugh I hope she swallows Crystal whole lmao.
Author's Response:
Be careful what you wish for, kind sir! :D
Date: October 19 2018 1:16 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Oof I really wanted Rachel to ultimately be Val's or a duo reign, the way you portray the tinys' experiences inside of the girls' stomachs is so perfect from panic to desperation to execution. Now Im really curious to see what happened between Brittany and Robyn in detail, and also the people Rachel has voluntarily eaten during her time with Val and their experiences, the moment her reluctance is encouraged into satisfaction by Val and herself. Sad Rachel just offed like that :(. Great story still! But damn really wanted to see more of Rachel
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry. I'm the worst. I had this planned for the past 10 chapters or so. Even I was rooting for her to live, and it was sad to write out this chapter. Which is kind of weird since I control her fate ultimately.
Thank you for the compliments though :D but it won't be the last we see of any action from Rachel. There's quite a few short stories I have in mind involving these characters that take place in between the events of the main set of chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 1:14 PM Title: Boob Ride
The dialogue between these two are excellent. Very clearly expresses the loose/easy going relationship they have with each other. Cannot wait to see Valerie realize her unsurfaced desires and begin to inflict them upon a helpless Crystal.
This story deserves far more reviews for the amount of chapters you have written. I feel as if it's been under rated which is a damn shame.
Keep up the incredible work!
Author's Response:
Muwahaha. Just you wait and see how terrible of a person I am. Thanks though :D I really never felt like it didn't get much attention though. I get lots of views, so I figure no news is good news and people must enjoy it alright. Still, I shall always strive to be better.