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Reviewer: eternallanguish Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2022 2:27 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro

Not sure if you're still active on here but I just wanted to say, as many others have, that your writing is excellent. This story, and specifically chapters 7, 8, 9 and 10, when Val eats and digests Crystal, Anne and Steven, might be my favorite content on this whole site. There's just something wonderful about how wickedly self indulgent and guilt-free Val is as she torments and consumes people. The line: "They were people, and worth remembering, and she wanted to get to know every single one of the ones she caught before sending them down into her bowels for good." -always sounded to me like it was suggesting that there were many, many more encounters around campus involving Valerie and other unfortunate tinies, and we might get a series of one-shots from you in the future? Wishful thinking on my part perhaps ;)



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks very much for your kind words!  Always great knowing someone out there's enjoyed my work.  Yeah, I definitely played with the idea of having some one-shots in this universe, with some even starring Val (canonically, I believe she ate well over 10 people before Anne, so plenty of shenanigans to be had there).  I've tried to start and finish so many stories between this series and now.. but I would like to get back into it.  Maybe also keep the stories shorter so I don't go off the rails so much xD

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 09 2021 8:48 PM Title: Climax... AM I RIGHT?

Reading this whole thing all over again makes me just as mad the first time through.... LOL (crystal...)

Anyways, haven't heard from you in ages bro, hope you're good. 



Author's Response:

Hey man, hope you're good too.  Sorry I'm a ghost, but you know how life can be.  You're still one of the few authors I even come back onto this site for, so you better keep on writing!  You know.. if you want.  :D

Reviewer: Gigatennisstar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2019 9:54 AM Title: Climax... AM I RIGHT?

Holy crap, an update to one of my favorite vore series ever.  I always hold out hope that you'll eventually get back to it ;D ;D ;D

But anyway, jokes and references aside I've been watching this story very careefully since it's beginning always excited to see a new chapter released. With this chapter I planned to do a review, but life got in the way.

First some thoughts on your Author's Note. For a first foray into the wiriting world you hit it out of the freaking park. Every moment hit and I feel like now that it's complete I need to go back and reread the entire thing to get a sense of how everything fits together. I understand losing a lot of what makes a story appealing the further in you go but depending on what it is you felt was appealing I think you still had it going all the way through.

To me the story was about "Ms Hyde", about Valerie and how she changed, what kind of person she became and even why. It all started with Crystal and just kept going from there. One experience changed her entire life, her entire perspective and this is just a chronicle of that change (not to mention all the things she went through before that). Even when Valerie reveals to Sierra in this chapter how eating Crystal changed her life, it felt very intimate and human (not to mention the other intimate stuff going on). I could feel the remorse of Valerie losing her best friend and feeling her life spiral out of her control. This entire story, she's had massive ups, shes had sour downs and each has shaped who she is and who she will become. That's what I think in the end made this so appealing, was not just Valerie herself but her struggle going forward with this new nature.

Anyway, that's just me and what I took away from it. I'm really sad to see this story come to a close but really excited to see what you have planned next. This truly has cemented you as one of my favorite vore authors. If you post it I'll read it, even if I don't review it. ;) Thanks for this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  That means a lot to me, and I am truly honored by your words.  I hope I will continue to live up to them :D

I felt like this story had been losing its appeal, but hearing otherwise definitely helps.  Even if you were the only person enjoying my work, at least my work is being enjoyed by someone, ya know? 

The other part is that while I have an idea of where I want the characters to be at the end of Act 5, I have no idea how I'm going to get them there, or ideas for what happens in between now and then... whereas before I always had some kind of direction, even if it was short term.  And I don't want to force myself to half-heartedly write the last act because that'll be no good to anyone, then.  In the meantime I'll write other story ideas out... and maybe at some point I'll be able to come back to this one when I have an idea of where to go.

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2019 3:21 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro

Holy shit yes! Thank you so much for having Laura end up inside Sierra, and love the romance building between Valerie and Sierra. Your digestion details are the best, it should be my imagination but really had me wanting the moment Laura gets sucked into Sierra's intestines and have her feel it. Glad Robyn finally got the justice she deserved too. Can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Haha.  It wasn't planned at first, but after writing Laura's 'close call' with Sierra pretending to gulp her down, let's just say that was a... uh, rather popular idea to have Laura be Sierra's snack.  So in the end it felt like the better idea :D

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2019 11:31 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro

YEEESSSSSS the power reversal in having a humble tiny grow and have her way with a once arrogant normal is the best, would hope Valerie would give Laura to Sierra though as she reminds her of Rachel and it's like having Laura digested by her once prey. Love it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2019 10:44 PM Title: Intersexing

I am honestly fucking speechless. SO much shit going on at once and yet it is done so well. I promised I wouldn't root for another tiny again after Rachel's death, but yet once more you have me growing feelings for Sierra. For the love of God... PLEASE DO NOT KILL HER!

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2019 1:13 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro

Ok ngl, it's still cool, but I don't know what's going on rn and miss the campus serial snacker Val :(

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 29 2019 7:22 PM Title: Mistress Fahrenheit

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!?!?!!?!?!?!?

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2019 4:26 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro

You know, I was on here looking for that divine inspiration, something to really call me back to writing this stuff after years of hiatus... This might have done it. I *love* Val, she's absolutely messed up in a very detailed and intimate way. I've only read up to... She just ate Anne and Steve. Delightful. Gotta go to work, but imma read more later.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Every comment means a lot to me, but I always feel especially honored when a fellow author comments on my story.  Even more so when it is a well-known author :D I hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2019 5:59 AM Title: The Last Hour

No the Robyn part was a good length. Any shorter and it would have felt rushed (trust me, I've rushed my scenes quite a few times)

It seems Daphne is to be trusted. I'm no fool though, Valerie is going to digest naive little Sierra and I'm not gonna care. NO FEELS FROM ME.



Author's Response:

Daphne is?  ;)

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2019 10:53 PM Title: Plans in Motion

I hate Laura with a burning passion but hot damn.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2019 8:33 AM Title: Near Goth Experience

Wow, you actually ARE capable of not mmurdering a tiny! 

 

I love where the plot is going, brilliant! JUSTICE FOR CRYSTAL!!!



Author's Response:

Haha.  Yeah, that's two tinies who HAVEN'T immediately been doomed upon entering a mouth.  Don't worry, once you read the next chapter you'll know things'll be back to normal :P

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2019 3:30 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro

Superb chapter like always. But damn I really hope Laura meets a bad end and someone please save Robyn.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Haha.  Oddly enough I feel the same.  As I'm writing through Robyn's ordeals, I feel like I'm being a terrible person all over again.  But it wouldn't be fun if characters didn't get to experience a bit of abuse every now and then.  Muwahaha.

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16 2019 1:02 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro

Yeah you are definitely my favorite vore writer, from the fear upon entering the mouth, the struggle trying not to get swallowed, realizing futility when in the stomach, the last fight for survival when draining into the intestines. I especially love how much emphasis you put that the ultimate death is dealt when sucked into the intestines instead of just getting swallowed. The only thing I don't like is how you set such a high bar for other vore stories haha. Hope you update soon! Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Haha, wow, that's a huge compliment.  Thanks!  I hope I continue to at least meet expectations :D I'm a fan of endings in the stomach, too, of course.  But there's just not as many stories where the tinies end up surviving into the intestines.

 

And I should have the next chapter up soon!  Just doing some final tweaks to it. 

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2019 12:07 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro

YEEESSS AN UPDATE. I'M SO EXCITED!!!!! 



Author's Response:

YEEEEEEAH!  Took me long enough xD  Hope you enjoyed it, though!

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2019 9:19 PM Title: ACT 4: Sierra and the Pale Rider

BY THE HEAVENS YOU HAVE FINALLY RETURNED! WOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOO. 

Sierra is a stupid fool. I look forward to reading as she dies painfully inside of Valerie's sexy gut. Also despite how much I hate Valerie for murdering Crystal and letting Rache's killer get off scot free I can't help but still fantasize being eaten and consumed by her because I'm a freak and that's what freaks do *puts on sunglasses*

Cannot wait for the next chapter and by God it better not take as long as it did for THIS ONE because I'm on the verge of an aneuryism.

Reviewer: Seething recidivist Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2019 2:31 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro

Yay we're back! Glad you're writing again, excited to see this story continue. Kinda feel sorry for Sierra lol, so eager to end up inside Valerie or some other girl.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2018 10:23 PM Title: Exposition / Trajectory

All caught up.... I'm dying for Rachel to come back but I know it won't happen. At least Vivian is recieving justice....

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2018 10:00 PM Title: ...And Long Live Hyde (Part 2)

I can't take these character deaths anymore. Legit killing me :( RIP RACHEL

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2018 9:41 PM Title: Hyde is Dead... (Part 1)

I can't stop laughing. SHE HAS POWERS NOW! Holy shit this is great xD

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