[Report This]Date: October 20 2018 3:01 PM Title: Best Laid Plans
Valerie forcing Steven against her throat as Anne was swallowed was HOT. And I'm loving the detective segments it's super cool! I cannot believe how underrated this story is it deserves far more attention!!
My heart still pains for Crystal... actually teared up by the mention of her name.
And omg I'm fantasizing hard for Valerie. God damn let that woman EAT ME!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much :D And yeah. There's one part later on that really hurt me to write out. Weird how attached we get to our own characters. Hurt me right in my author-parts to write it. You'll see. And Valerie is by no means picky, if you're small enough for her to swallow then you'll be in her stomach before you know it ;)
Date: March 02 2018 7:13 PM Title: Best Laid Plans
I think you should make an AU spin off where she keeps Crystal as her little plaything and doesn't ever swallow her, but she does torment her by swallowing others in front of her or even while crystal is also in her mouth, that would be great!
Author's Response:
Wow, that's a pretty cool idea, actually. That kind of inspires me for some scenarios in this universe too! But I do like the idea of an AU story, so maybe I can think about doing one after this one's done.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2018 11:40 PM Title: Best Laid Plans
When I read this story I chuckled when it was confirmed this was inspired by the halestorm song of the same name.
You really know your vore and Crystal being swallowed unware was actually quite thrilling to read. If Valerie had done it aware the impact of the power she had over her friends fate might have been a tad less. Out of all the stories with a unware vore sene in them, this story has the best one in my book.
Great story so far!
Author's Response:
Haha, I thought it was a nice touch. And yeah, you're right, I thought about it some more and I think having it be unaware was the right way to go. I still plan on having more unaware stuff for this story in the (near) future, it's just there's a lot of very intentional bad vibes being directed at the tiny folk right now. Thanks for the comment!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2018 9:42 PM Title: Best Laid Plans
Coming off of hiatus, and this was the first story that caught my eye. And holy shit, the last two chapters were very well written! Haven’t had my heart actually pounding like that from reading in quite some time.
Author's Response:
Wow, thanks so much! That means a lot, because you too are one of my favorite authors. Gotta be doing something right if two of my favorite authors are liking my work :D