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Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2018 8:06 PM Title: ACT 2: Two For One, Twice

Though I miss Crystal I'll say that you reinvigorated my interest with the new turn of events! Valerie is now a serial kidnapper possibly killer to boot. And investigators? Fuck yeah baby! This will be so good. Nice job bro



Author's Response:

Haha thanks :D really glad you're into it so far.  I think I'm most anxious about how you critique the last set of chapters... I can't help but feel like that was where some of my weaker writing was, even though I try to put the same effort and care in every chapter.

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