Date: April 16 2022 2:27 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Not sure if you're still active on here but I just wanted to say, as many others have, that your writing is excellent. This story, and specifically chapters 7, 8, 9 and 10, when Val eats and digests Crystal, Anne and Steven, might be my favorite content on this whole site. There's just something wonderful about how wickedly self indulgent and guilt-free Val is as she torments and consumes people. The line: "They were people, and worth remembering,
and she wanted to get to know every single one of the ones she caught
before sending them down into her bowels for good." -always sounded to me like it was suggesting that there were many, many more encounters around campus involving Valerie and other unfortunate tinies, and we might get a series of one-shots from you in the future? Wishful thinking on my part perhaps ;)
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks very much for your kind words! Always great knowing someone out there's enjoyed my work. Yeah, I definitely played with the idea of having some one-shots in this universe, with some even starring Val (canonically, I believe she ate well over 10 people before Anne, so plenty of shenanigans to be had there). I've tried to start and finish so many stories between this series and now.. but I would like to get back into it. Maybe also keep the stories shorter so I don't go off the rails so much xD
Date: May 29 2019 3:21 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Holy shit yes! Thank you so much for having Laura end up inside Sierra, and love the romance building between Valerie and Sierra. Your digestion details are the best, it should be my imagination but really had me wanting the moment Laura gets sucked into Sierra's intestines and have her feel it. Glad Robyn finally got the justice she deserved too. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
Haha. It wasn't planned at first, but after writing Laura's 'close call' with Sierra pretending to gulp her down, let's just say that was a... uh, rather popular idea to have Laura be Sierra's snack. So in the end it felt like the better idea :D
Date: May 05 2019 11:31 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
YEEESSSSSS the power reversal in having a humble tiny grow and have her way with a once arrogant normal is the best, would hope Valerie would give Laura to Sierra though as she reminds her of Rachel and it's like having Laura digested by her once prey. Love it! Can't wait for more!
Date: March 31 2019 1:13 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Ok ngl, it's still cool, but I don't know what's going on rn and miss the campus serial snacker Val :(
Date: March 29 2019 4:26 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
You know, I was on here looking for that divine inspiration, something to really call me back to writing this stuff after years of hiatus... This might have done it. I *love* Val, she's absolutely messed up in a very detailed and intimate way. I've only read up to... She just ate Anne and Steve. Delightful. Gotta go to work, but imma read more later.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Every comment means a lot to me, but I always feel especially honored when a fellow author comments on my story. Even more so when it is a well-known author :D I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: February 19 2019 3:30 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Superb chapter like always. But damn I really hope Laura meets a bad end and someone please save Robyn.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Haha. Oddly enough I feel the same. As I'm writing through Robyn's ordeals, I feel like I'm being a terrible person all over again. But it wouldn't be fun if characters didn't get to experience a bit of abuse every now and then. Muwahaha.
Date: February 16 2019 1:02 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Yeah you are definitely my favorite vore writer, from the fear upon entering the mouth, the struggle trying not to get swallowed, realizing futility when in the stomach, the last fight for survival when draining into the intestines. I especially love how much emphasis you put that the ultimate death is dealt when sucked into the intestines instead of just getting swallowed. The only thing I don't like is how you set such a high bar for other vore stories haha. Hope you update soon! Can't wait!
Author's Response:
Haha, wow, that's a huge compliment. Thanks! I hope I continue to at least meet expectations :D I'm a fan of endings in the stomach, too, of course. But there's just not as many stories where the tinies end up surviving into the intestines.
And I should have the next chapter up soon! Just doing some final tweaks to it.
Date: February 13 2019 12:07 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
YEEESSS AN UPDATE. I'M SO EXCITED!!!!!
Author's Response:
YEEEEEEAH! Took me long enough xD Hope you enjoyed it, though!
Date: January 08 2019 2:31 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Yay we're back! Glad you're writing again, excited to see this story continue. Kinda feel sorry for Sierra lol, so eager to end up inside Valerie or some other girl.
Date: October 19 2018 1:16 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Oof I really wanted Rachel to ultimately be Val's or a duo reign, the way you portray the tinys' experiences inside of the girls' stomachs is so perfect from panic to desperation to execution. Now Im really curious to see what happened between Brittany and Robyn in detail, and also the people Rachel has voluntarily eaten during her time with Val and their experiences, the moment her reluctance is encouraged into satisfaction by Val and herself. Sad Rachel just offed like that :(. Great story still! But damn really wanted to see more of Rachel
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry. I'm the worst. I had this planned for the past 10 chapters or so. Even I was rooting for her to live, and it was sad to write out this chapter. Which is kind of weird since I control her fate ultimately.
Thank you for the compliments though :D but it won't be the last we see of any action from Rachel. There's quite a few short stories I have in mind involving these characters that take place in between the events of the main set of chapters.
[Report This]Date: October 19 2018 8:58 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Amazing. Wish I had started this story sooner. The but where Crys was casually mistaken for popcorn and tossed in Val's mouth was awesome and totally erotic. I love the dialogue between the two as well. I loved how you narrated the fact that there was no flash of light or sci fi sfx as if it was a cliche, bloody brilliant and gave me a chuckle.
Was fairly well paced as well, so not much to criticize imo other than a few sentences seeming a bit out of place.
Solid work. Can't wait to read more once I get home!
(I'm very picky with stories I read. If I don't get hooked quickly I abandon it. So trust me you did some good work!)
Author's Response:
A positive review from another great author on this site!? It is an honor :D Thank you very much, and I hope you find the rest of the series just as enjoyable!
Date: September 30 2018 2:23 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Yay update again, although no real action, excited to see what Val's really planning. Question though, what happened to Brittany? I don't think we ever got to see her fate if she died or I missed it, did Val do anything to her?
Author's Response:
I haven't yet revealed what happened to her, but I will in the next chapter :D
Date: September 11 2018 10:23 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
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Date: August 28 2018 2:04 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Absolutely one of my favourite stories on the site! I'm really anticipating to see Valerie figure out her feelings for Rachel now.. though personally I hope she doesn't treat her like Crystal.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I am honored. And I can say with certain vagueness that that's a good hope to have for the next chapter :D
Date: August 13 2018 10:37 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Whoa! It's creepy, I JUST looked this old gem up yesterday to re read what had happened and I had thought this one had died! seeing an update is awesome!
Author's Response:
So long as I live this story shan't die! ..it just might be a while in between updates. :D Though Ill try to get better at it.
[Report This]Date: May 09 2018 10:59 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
Glad you kept going with the story. Valerie needs to punish Vivian for what she did to Rachel though. Personally, I would like to see a tiny Vivian introduced to Valerie's butt .
Date: March 03 2018 9:50 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
But Val ending Crystal on purpose is the hottest thing that's happened in the whole story! >:)
[Report This]Date: March 03 2018 8:20 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
This is still one of my favorite stories being written right now. Great stuff.
One thing I'd love to see is for Rachel to trap Katie in her ass. She has been complaining about the tiny girl being a pain in the ass and thinking about sitting on her, so I think it'd be fun for Katie to get dropped down the back of Rachel's panties in between her cheeks and have to undergo a day full of being sat on and crushed. Maybe this could culminate in a night where Rachel and Valerie are fooling around with each other, rolling around in bed while Katie futilely struggles in Rachel's ass.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Haha. This may or may not be 100% exactly where I was going to take things. Give or take some extra details :D
Date: February 17 2018 8:02 PM Title: ACT 1: Intro
I’m enjoying this story so far. I’m excited to see the direction you take with it. :)
Author's Response:
Oh, man. That moment when you get a positive comment from a writer you've held in high regard for a long time. I am honored *bows*
Now hopefully I don't ruin everything :D
[Report This]Date: February 17 2018 10:32 AM Title: ACT 1: Intro
This was outstanding, gonna mimic what someone else said, very Holly the freshmen vibe to it. And thats a very good thing, manage to get the size factor in just right. GJ look forward to more.
Forgot my rating >.<
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad everyone is enjoying the story so far!