[Report This]Date: January 30 2019 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oooo, I wonder if she'll try on that new underwear now too... ;)
[Report This]Date: April 25 2018 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Im glad of the boy who comissioned this. Im seriously happy it happened!
Author's Response:
I'm sure plenty are as well
[Report This]Date: April 21 2018 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
if you hadn't made the mother sound like over wait and old in other words,UGLY! I would have liked it but you made her gross I couldn't read anymore and the son is the kind of person I don't like to read about ill try some other of your work you seem like a good writer I hope you keep on writing because I would like to read more of your work. but not this one sorry
Author's Response:
My impression is that you didn't read the story intro note before diving in so, uh... sorry not sorry, I guess? Don't know what to tell ya; it's just a taste.
Date: February 11 2018 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love Roberta's joy at picking out little clothing. Her raised eyebrow sets him straight. Loved that one. Her control over him is growing. Hopefully his respect will too. Maybe he will learn to answer Roberta with Yes Ma'am.
If he won't obey her commands then she shows him what happens. The sliding of her fingernail as she undresses him is great. Maybe he will be more obedient and grateful next time. Having her use her pinkie to move the clothing really shows how small and insignificant he is.
Greatly enjoy the realism that you put in this story. Of course all little people need new clothing. R&R obviously thought ahead.
I really look forward to this story,
Diesel
Author's Response:
His respect will eventually grow, but probably slower than she wants.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2018 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love the fact in this universe overall that they've embraced shrinking people like it was a new diet fad or something.
Judy's reach must've really reached deep into the world's mindset.
Author's Response:
Judy would definitely be a big influence on these characters for sure, though she technically isn't in this same universe.