Date: May 23 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
That is great news. I have been thinking a lot about ordering a story and the time frame was something that put me off. I have ideas and thought of writing myself. I just don't enjoy it the same way when I write it myself.
Date: May 23 2018 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
That is disappointing especially if the story is written. I love this story and your writing style. The wait is getting a bit much now though. The cliff hangers are great if there is something to look forward to in a reasonable amount of time.
There will be more very soon. I like to think of it as somewhat of a perk of commissioning me that the story stays "exclusive" to the person who ordered/purchased it for longer. But more will go up soon.
Date: May 12 2018 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
why did you want to ruin the story,you made it disgusting no one wants to read about a gross woman im sorry it could have been a good or great story it's like you hate women but I do have to say you are a good writer I would like to read more of your writing but like this one
At this point it just sounds like you're willfully reading something you figured out several chapters ago that you don't like.
Date: April 22 2018 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
This has by far been my favorite story. It has pretty much everything I like, I would gladly sacrifice some of the group chapters to get to the action. This chapter was great, cant wait for her to catch him. Im hoping when she does she loose the bra and panties. Would love to read about her standing over him in all her glory. I know theres no foot stuff but I think it would be cool for her to catch him with her foot like he runs into her foot falls and then as he is laying between her feet looking staright up at her, a foot looms over him as she picks him up between her toes and passes him to her hand. Just a thought.
Really hope we get to the real action soon.
Glad you like it. This story is actually already written, and per the commissioner's choices there won't be foot content, but there will still be plenty from other categories.
Date: April 21 2018 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
if you hadn't made the mother sound like over wait and old in other words,UGLY! I would have liked it but you made her gross I couldn't read anymore and the son is the kind of person I don't like to read about ill try some other of your work you seem like a good writer I hope you keep on writing because I would like to read more of your work. but not this one sorry
My impression is that you didn't read the story intro note before diving in so, uh... sorry not sorry, I guess? Don't know what to tell ya; it's just a taste.
Date: March 30 2018 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want to he mad about having to wait but that was a hell of a cliff hanger. I can't wait for next chapter. I'm excited to see where Kyle is when Roberta wakes up and whether or not she remembers her drunkin antics. Best story I've read
Need to have those cliffhangers so people will tune in for the next chapter
Date: March 24 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
Who has it worse, Kyle or Scott?
In this world, it seems like it's okay to inflict extremely harsh punishments in public(You'd think that the group therapist would have intervened when she stuck him up there and especially after she farted. The people in the room also didn't seem to care that she blew him) as opposed to the Time-Out world where Scott is mainly abused in private.
I really like this story and world that has been set up.
Scott has it rough, but Kyle's got some pretty difficult times ahead.
Those are good observations about the reactions of the characters in the group, and it's the main reason why this is a different universe than the T-O world. If Judy did some of what she does to Scott in public, we would see some more realistic reactions. Roberta meanwhile is pretty free to be herself in front of people
Date: March 24 2018 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter, your really teasing us. I wanted to share a link to a 30 sec video of a twilight zone clip, you can find by googling fat twighlight zone giantess. Its how I picture roberta and kyle
Thanks for reviewing
Date: March 22 2018 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not trying to be a pain, but this story has ticked so many of my boxes, or at least hinted at them all. Would like some foot play, although Im glad its not the focus. Any ways. Is there any chance you could include a not in each chapter with a rought eta of next one.
Author's Response: Glad youíre liking it. There wonít be any real footplay in this one; the focus is definitely a bit higher up. I donít usually predict chapter ETAs in case it turns out wrong, but there will be a new one up today or tomorrow.