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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 1:34 AM Title: One, Two, Threesome

Maybe Shannon should start bouncing up and down when she proposes an idea. That way, Alejandro will be way busy with keeping his footing and has no time to complain lol

And it's kind of fun to see how those normals majors don't want to take Alejandro seriously, but completely understand that they are outmatched when Shannon walks in and submit.

I think Lindsey and Sabrina won't be happy with that last part. One of the few perks of moving away from Winton and working for Shannon was no more Mei. But is seems that Mei, uhh finds a way.

Thank you for writing! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Nah, she can't bounce, she would fall. She's strong, but not THAT strong. But it would definitively work on Alejandro, poor guys is just a man, after all !

Concerning her bullying others, I found that the MAJOR society actually allow for a lot of power plays and change of behaviour. They're all hardwired to be those dominants assholes, but also to respect those they can't take on when fighting them is useless (at least I see them like that). And when a Minor is on the line, even a little mouse would jump at an elephant !

Introducing Mei's demands (yes, plural) will be a major plotpoint of the upcoming "arc" with the characters from the Main Story, I hope I'll manage to do justice to NotSirk writing here !

Thanks you for your comment and as always, thanks for your support.

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