[Report This]Date: February 23 2018 10:54 PM Title: Settling in New Orleans
Hmmmmm. I find that "structural weakness" excuse rather suspicious. If I were Alejandro I'd check into that.
A decent chapter overall. Kind of feels like a setup chapter. Alejandro's just settling in but I feel like seeds for story threads are being planted. Like Jim's daughter or the gators! That's carzy by the way. MAJORS are insane!
Can't wait for Lindsey amd Al to start school.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was kind of hard to write because of its nature as a transition chapter, but I think it's the kind of things needed to build up my writing skills and this story. I can definitively tell you that you got the main hooks for future chapters in this one, but there is also one which will be used sooner or later and which is a lot less evident, I think ;) !