Date: January 26 2018 2:23 PM Title: the fear
Good story, Jesssica, I always like the revenge theme. I'm looking forard to the next chapter.
One tip: edit your work, before you post it -- I do, and no matter how many times I reread a chapter, even after its posted, I always find errors, or something that could have been written better.
One thing, I didn't understand 1/4r43.
Date: January 25 2018 1:44 PM Title: Soccor
beautiful story my love please keep making more just like this one but do you think you could add more tags to the story like insertation, incest, brests ETC.. but still a good story
Author's Response: its not done yet