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Reviewer: b123 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2018 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After

This took a 180 turn real quick. I honestly thought he was gonna end up somehow with Bernie but that ending of the first chapter left me surprised. This second chapter answered some of my questions but raised even more! Like others mentioned, I definitely want to read more and know what happens next. why exactly did Luna choose Thomas??

I'm hooked on this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I was actually worried people wouldn't like the concept. I feared they'd feel baited somehow. I hope I can keep you hooked! Why did Luna choose Thomas? Good question! What else you got?!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2018 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: Life After

I like this. I hope we to get meet Luna.



Author's Response:

Hopefully right? I mean what would be the point of any of this if we didn't? Maybe like a Marcelus Wallace briefcase thing?

Thanks for the comment.

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