Date: January 25 2018 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 Say something (part 1)
I'm really liking these characters and where you're taking them. Good stuff, can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like my story! For now I am going to update it day by day although unfortunately I can not assure a specific time :( And if you allow me a question, what is your favorite character?
I hope to see you here! See you!
Date: January 24 2018 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6 Say something (part 1)
Hanna seems like a nice girl. It's too bad she gets picked on a lot by the other kids.
Unfortunately, I think some concepts are lost in translation. The dialog tags help, but it's still challenging to read and follow. I know some folks write giantess stories on language-specific boards. That might be a good idea to get more reviewers. Just a thought.
Author's Response:
For reviews do not worry! I have plenty of reviews in real life (all the people I've written / adapted stories and scripts for theater), also not find a forum or a page for stories of giantess in Spanish is quite difficult :(
On the part of Hannah, she has not changed since she was little, still a girl who is quiet but with a good heart. Here the problem is the feeling of herd / clan. Sofia made the decision with 12 years to have to mess with Hannah and everyone decided it was the right thing to do. At the end of the day, Sofia is the lion, the king of the jungle and the words of a lion is the law.