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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2018 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 14: Competition

Finally Maxine gets some simple comforts. I'm really glad you didn't portray Maxine as miserable but have her at least this. It was also a fun little adventure to read.

It's a pity she can't get the bandits to come.out using a barrel of beer. Then she wouldn't have so much work to do.

Also, thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Well she can be miserable sometimes, but that would probably not work out.

 

But she wouldn't want to give up a barrel of beer.

 

You're welcome.

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