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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2018 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 11: Patrol

Angleland, what a ghetto. You can't even trust the little girls there. At least somebody proposed to simply move away from this hellhole. But at least they have Maxine to protect them now.

If only Maxine was a little bigger, she could keep up with the bandits and could gather some more respect because the horses would have trouble keeping up with her ;) yes, I'm at it again

 

On a more serious note, this plot about the bandits is getting interrinter. I wonder what the role of the little girl is.

Also, thank you for writing!



Author's Response:

You can't really trust anyone, even me. Maxine does wish that she could grow much like her mother and sisters. 

 

You'll find out her role soon.

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