Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2021 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Many thanks for this fascinating fiction. If the fictional character, “Brent Tucker”, is a female, this would be an excruciating story. For instance, in Chapter 4, as the author - “Jacksmith” wrote, “Though Larissa’s foot was noticeably smaller than Ms. Perkins’, when he stood at half the size of a human thumb, the hapless office worker couldn’t much appreciate the difference.”. Consequently, if I was underneath Larissa’s supple “size-six foot”, supposing that any part of her sole is pressing on my breasts, I would be in immeasurable pain!

While submitting myself to a mammogram is painful to some extent, but it would be awfully excruciating to be place in this fictional scenario, especially if it happens during the week before my period, as that’s when my breasts will be most sensitive. Keep in mind that breasts are compose of lobules, ducts, for the most part, fatty and fibrous connective tissue, that’s very delicate!

Reviewer: Tinyone234 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2018 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

>He may have gotten the impression that the outcome wasn't going to be different, regardless of his rhetoric.

 it's still sexy to watch him try, and fail~

10/10 though regardless.

Author's Response:

I can't disagree with that; glad you still liked it.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2018 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Based on the plot, it should be fun (blessed be anonymous commissions)!

Author's Response:

Here's hoping