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Reviewer: ellubkru Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2018 7:30 AM Title: Itty bitty Mandy

Well that was great. Thanks for being open to suggestions.

Shrinking, micro, mean girls winning, cumming on her things... Sign me up for every chapter in this story line (I just hope "grow back" means grow back to 1 mm). Sounds like Melania is the type who would then get off on seducing Mandy's reluctant and unaware boyfriend right above her while Mandy can do nothing but to watch and listen. It's just super hot if every time she asserts her superiority or emphasizes Mandy's inferiority it makes her cum harder.

(The only thing that seemed a little out of character in the chapter was that a stuck-up witch would ever let herself be described as "over-stretched")

Like the previous comment, thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment ! Truth been told, I'm not sure I'll continue this story, because I don't think I'm really good at this kind fo story, as demonstrated by my Aunt Suzie's ending (which I may retool someday, if I feel like it). But I'm open to all kind of suggestion about upcoming short stories, possibly even short series !

Also, I'm the narrator, if I say that her vagina is over-stretched, Melania has to accept it, and deal with it. Over-stretched it is ! 

:p

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2018 1:41 PM Title: Itty bitty Mandy

This is so much better, nobody believed that puny Mandy was overpowering someone for a second!

 

Thanks for writing! I really enjoy your short stories!



Author's Response:

Yeah, don't go belittling Mandy. Universe 1 Mandy definitively is a powerful witch, I'll have you know ! 

Thanks for the compliment, feel free to ask for a setting for me to toy with, by the way !

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