Date: January 29 2018 5:04 AM Title: Brotherly love
Initial thoughts: Wow.....Tim's a jerk! He completely tookcontrol of his brothers life in place of his own ideas for what was good for Alex (I hope I got the names right. Alex is the one that got gender bent right?) Not only that but for all his declarations of "love" for his "bro" Alex is just a concubine, a side dish, a sex slave because he actually loves someone else. Jerk! Alex should leave!
More well though chapter reactions: Tim is a JERK!! That can't be said enough! But there seem to be a lot of rather tragic factors for poor Alex. Like apparently being the only normal human in a family of god? What with the "Perfect" irresistible brother with magic powers, a mother who eat planets, a cursed father, and mysterious sisters. So living his own life would be difficult and inherently unfair, unable to compete or even find love at all as a human male because his brother seems born for the sole purpose of forcefully evolving the species by siring the next generation!*deep breath* GEEZ! That's high concept! Makes me wonder why the mother even bothered having Alex at all when he seemed doomed to be criminally overshadowed by his "Perfect" godly brother.
So anyway I feel like there's potential for that story mostly because I like that subject matter. "Normal struggling to live with abnormal, superior, magical, ect) It's almost like I wrote a story or three about that. That being said it feels like this is the last chapter of said story. Which might be an interesting twist. How will Alex cope as a woman with a selfish perpetually horny irresistible older brother? Can he still find happiness? Will he reject and escape his situation or embrace life as Tim's concubine? One of many probably. I hope it's not that second one, but I could read it!