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Reviewer: Smartalec Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2021 9:30 PM Title: Nine is a great number

I'd love to see you explore the world from Mayday! Mayday! a bit more

Reviewer: Panzerhunter Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2018 8:58 PM Title: Nine is a great number

I hope you continue Adrien and Johanna's story!



Author's Response:

Really ? Hum, I'll think about it then ! Thanks for the comment.

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 4:07 PM Title: Nine is a great number

Just wanted to say that I had an idea for a one chapter sequel to "Brotherly Love" I don't know why but a bunch of ideas popped in my head from the little bits of world you teased. Know idea if I'll actually write it but I'm asking just in case. 



Author's Response:

Go wild with it !

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 2:51 PM Title: Nine is a great number

Everything I've read has been really good work. I find it amazing to see a story come up from so little detail in the comments. Any chance to see a very short girl put on a pair of high heels that changes her height to tower over her collosal roommate. Or one about a massive girl (14+ feet) getting shrunken down in the showers after making fun of a short witch?

Author's Response:

I'll try to write it as soon as my schedule will calm down IRL ;)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2018 5:16 AM Title: Nine is a great number

So instead of deleting and reposting again I'll just do a second post. I'm writing this from a phone which makes posting long replies difficult. I may fix this when I get to a proper computer.

Finally writing thoughts.: You seem to excel at writing sexy high concept sci-fi stuff. My favorite being Fortune Reversal. So I say write what you like and don't feel bad about dropping a story for something else. That's what I did! Not that I don't have passion for MAJOR/minor, quite the opposite in fact. I already have way more stuff to write and written for that but sometimes you just have to do something different. Refresh the brain. That's why I like the story factory. Just throw ideas out and see what sticks. Done with Aunt Suzie. Then be done with Aunt Suzie. I've read it. I feel you could end a story like that anywhere with a decent and satisfying conclusion. Just do what you want! While I can say I personally want certain things I feel it's best you decide where to continue! I don't really have any story ideas on me know though.

Actually I could think of a story from Mayday where a microscopic father tries to reconnect with his non micro family. It would be kind of funny sad! Good luck!



Author's Response:

Whoa, thanks for the long reviews. I hadn't expected such well though out reaction to this chapter, haha ! Without spiling too much about Alex... his mother really love his father and was afraid he would feel lonely without a normal son... well, turned out it will be a girl now, but, even a Goddess can only do so much, i guess ^^

Also, as a special thanks, a tease for the next story about Shannon and Alejandro : there will be a scene of Shannon doing a very special strip-tease for Alejandro, with dark light and painting reacting to it. I won't say more, however ;) !

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2018 8:54 PM Title: Nine is a great number

Thanks for using my ideas! I really enjoyed them! In case you come up with some room in the near future in this, could you maybe do a follow up to the nipple one? Maybe she brings in a friend for some kinky sexual fun with her micro sized bf? Maybe exploring some lower regions of the two ladies?



Author's Response:

Hum, all good ideas, I'll probably write something alone those lines sooner or later.

PS : nothing to do with your post, but I'm kind of ambivalent here. I'm glad to see this story have so man read so quickly, but I'm sad that Dance with Fire has already fallen to second place. Snif :(



Author's Response:

Hum, all good ideas, I'll probably write something alone those lines sooner or later.

PS : nothing to do with your post, but I'm kind of ambivalent here. I'm glad to see this story have so man read so quickly, but I'm sad that Dance with Fire has already fallen to second place. Snif :(

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2018 2:52 AM Title: Nine is a great number

Responding here so that you see it,

I've said it before and I'll say it again. Go ahead and write what you want MAJOR/minors a free story online I have no attachment to. It's just a story. I don't care what you decide to write in it's universe and that goes for anybody! I don't know if there's really enough interest for a wiki though. MAJORS were generally two to three feet taller than minors for most of their evolution if that helps.

That being said I'm continually impressed by your drive to write! I could never sustain the format for this type of random reader created storytelling!



Author's Response:

Thanks ! Then, in the next few weeks/months, you can expect Fall of Mu (probably my darkest take on MAJOR/Minors, by far) :)

Truth been told, writing here has in fact allowed me to work on my draft novel a lot more, as strange as it may appears to be ^^. Don't know why, I guess it's a lot like going o the gym (which I don't haha) : The more you write the easiest it becomes o write more ! Also, I can't wait to see your next work, whatzver it may be !

 

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2018 9:53 AM Title: Nine is a great number

What do you think of a turkish/ arab belly dancer with a tiny tourist woman?

Author's Response:

I'll work on it, but there may be twists on the location, haha !

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2018 9:49 AM Title: Nine is a great number

Oh wait you already wrote it

Nvm then thanks anyways

Reviewer: Leylagts Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2018 9:49 AM Title: Nine is a great number

Yeah

I would like the white girl
To be 1 mm
The indian girl will be beautiful
Similar looking to priyanka chopra
Maybe 5'8 or 5'9 or something
Medium brown , caramel skin, fit body , dominant personality

Reviewer: NewB92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2018 6:41 PM Title: Nine is a great number

This is all really good work!  Really enjoyed the last few stories posted.  Any chance for one involving a ridiculously tall girl being outgrown by the rest of the female population.



Author's Response:

That should be doable :) !

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2018 12:00 PM Title: Nine is a great number

That's exciting news.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2018 11:03 AM Title: Nine is a great number

Wow, thank you so much. I really appreciate your writing this story. I feel honored. Now I belong to Aunt Suzie.
Thanks again,
Diesel

Author's Response:

You're welcom ! Also, there will be at least another story with Suzie and Stephen :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2018 4:18 AM Title: Nine is a great number

A story idea if I may. Aunt Suzie has wavy blonde hair and wears black high heeled pumps. One day her nephew who lives in her basement shrinks from a chemistry project he's working on. He accidentally spills it on himself. Stephen is now 2 inches tall. Aunt Suzie eventually notices him on the floor. She puts him in a small fish aquarium. He's very scared. There is no escape. She calls him sweetie or honey and tells him it's for his own good. Please add in whatever you want as a surprise. Thank you very much.

Author's Response:

I'll work on it next week, don't worry :) !

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2018 7:26 AM Title: Nine is a great number

Thank you for writing these short stories and also nice to see you writing again after finishing Dance with Fire.

I like them!



Author's Response:

You're welcome ! And I'm glad that you like it, it's always great to know that my stories please peoples :)

Reviewer: The Micro Giant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2018 2:56 AM Title: Nine is a great number

These are awesome! I'm really enjoying your work so far. If you are taking requests, could you do one where a woman shrinks her boyfriend to micro sized on her breasts and plays with him? Maybe she invites a girlfriend over to help taunt him? Maybe he ends up inside one of them?

If not that, maybe a muscular woman gradually shrinks her lover on her body while she exercises until the lover is too small to see?

 

No matter what though, I look forward to your next stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the praise ! I look forward for your writings too :) ! I'll do the muscle addict and her boyfriend next week, I've got problems with my computer right now...

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 4:07 PM Title: Nine is a great number

Didn't think you'd put it up so fast. Was not expecting world building to go with my request but thank you.

Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 11:22 AM Title: Nine is a great number

I really enjoyed a couple of these stories. I find it an interesting concept of having a bunch of short stories together like this. Any chance for one about an extremely tall (7'6") model having to do a photoshoot with a famous super model that is 5'6". It is based on an amazon and a goddess. The extremely tall girl is shrunken several times in order to make the super model look bigger.

Author's Response:

I sure can ! It'll probably take me more time than the others, because the story will need to be longer than most here, and I've computer problem... but I'll try to put it out this week !

Reviewer: rabbithole Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2018 10:50 PM Title: Nine is a great number

You could probably fill this up just with Johanna's 8 exes. If you're feeling better could I request an unaware story about a dust sized airplane?



Author's Response:

I have plans for Johanna, but hadn't thought of that, strangely enough ! And I'll do my best to write your the airplane story :)

Reviewer: NotSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2018 5:20 PM Title: Nine is a great number

I actually really liked Fortune Reversal. a33;a33;a33;a33;a33; for that one.



Author's Response:

Glade you liked it. I may do more stories in this universe done the lane, who knows ;) 

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