[Report This]Date: May 05 2018 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
What a twist at the end. Overall another solid story. I do always feel a little bit wanting more at the end of your stories. They. Never end the same, but all kind of take a hard twist somewhere. So you know something is coming just not what. Would love to see more world building and actual ruling of goddess in your stories.
Like I said another solid entry. Can't wait for your next one!
Author's Response:
Well, I like plot twists... I guess it's one of my signatures...
As for The Plan, the story is not finished yet. There is still one more chapter and an epilogue. Not sure if it will include what you are looking for, but please let me know your thoughts once it's done.
Hope you will like my next projects too!
Date: May 05 2018 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Kinda funny this story is called "the plan", im like what plan? Laura just seems like your typical dumb, horny, gts bimbo, not that its a bad thing mind you. Even before her friend died her plan was basically, "im big, your small so you listen to me and maybe I dont kill you", is there anything in that empty head of hers, lol. I like the story tho, just the title is ironic to me.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. The Plan refers to the aliens' plan, not so much Laura's...
Date: May 05 2018 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story so much! It’s great to see things from Kendra’s point of view, and I’d love to read more scenes such as that one.
Keep it up! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad that you are enjoying it. Kendra's scene was interesting to write too. The Plan is coming to its conclusion, so there won't be that many more scenes like Kendra's, but it's a resource I typically use in my stories ;)
Please, keep letting me know what you think as new chapters come out!