Reviews For The Plan
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Reviewer: asapshvn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2018 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

Honestly, one of my favorite parts of this story are the aliens talking at the end as they provide a whole new POV and insight that I might have missed. Other than that, the bit of crushing gore and gentleness keeps this story flowing well. Great job on this chapter, and I'm excited for the next!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. The bit with the conversation between the aliens at the end of each chapter is one of the parts of the story I felt would be more original when I was planning it. It was not always obvious to include the comments, but overall I believe it has been a nice addition to the story, since it allowed me to use the aliens to explain some of the behaviors and changes in attitude of Laura that otherwise would have been only implied (and it helped me not to have to abuse the figure of the omniscient narrator). 

Hope that you will enjoy what's coming too. Please, keep letting me know what your think!

Cheers!

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