Date: January 02 2018 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another great chapter. I really like the emphasis of referring to Andrew as God. I think it makes so much sense. Would like to see him talk a bit more. His voice effecting his civilization is amazing to think about. I think hand interaction is totally under rated. Would love to see more of that - what if he snapped on tight latex gloves because he thinks of them as bugs and doesn't want to get his hands dirty. The gloves could be part of his maintence routine!
Can't wait for more
Date: January 02 2018 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
This story is incredible. In so few words you've managed to paint a vivid picture of the sheer scale that the god in the Aquarium's care has compared to the others. I already love Jessica, and hope to see more. Maybe in the future you could provide a bit more in depth details just to push it a little farther but this is honestly really good for a start!~