Date: December 28 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story was really nice and sweet. The perspective was written convincingly, and very consistent throughout which is hard to do when someone doesn't think in words.
And the small touchs of interaction feel really genuine and nice, and they really add to the story instead of feeling tacked-on.
Overall, a good concept execute flawlessly.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I wanted the add in those little details to show that there is a bit more human interaction between the two characters. Iím very happy they didnít feel tacked on like I feared they might have been. Thank you for the review!