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Reviewer: Parzival14 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2018 6:20 AM Title: the shrink

I miss you too Jess,
Is there a way we can message eachother?

Author's Response: b34; If the stars align b34; right now I feel safe on here as long as no more PI is shared including numbers. I dont feel comfortable and forcing it on me will make thing worse so lets keep ourselves safe and stay within the limits ok?

Reviewer: Parzival14 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2018 10:46 PM Title: the shrink

Welcome back Jessica. I hope everything will get better.

Author's Response: I hope so too. Its not easy or fun to battle Depression. It feels like a battlefield everyday. I want to be there for my daugher but depression makes it so much harder. My heart feels empty everyday. Tears run down my eyes alot.

Reviewer: chasekampfer Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2018 5:11 PM Title: the shrink

its nice to see you back jessica i bbelive you had everybody worried because you were gone for a long time



Author's Response: What I need is comfort and for this depression to go away. Im not mentally able to take care of my daughter battling this mental illness. It sucks.

Reviewer: tinygirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: March 21 2018 12:08 PM Title: the shrink

As it is right now, this story is unreadable. Once the formatting is fixed, the author's limited grasp of how to use the English language is very apparent.



Author's Response: Yes my english is not the best. im not from america. The formating is the U.S. and in Norway is diffrent. I also am battling depression but thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 27 2017 12:26 PM Title: the shrink

Katelyn i love you with all my heart. I hope we can do stories together someday daughter. Im a single mother with no husband anymore. Hunger got the best of me. Lol

Reviewer: master369 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2017 5:49 AM Title: the shrink

Wow, I loved this story.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. Kate is a revenge full girl.

Reviewer: TheShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 12:41 PM Title: humiliated

Very good, Giantess Jessica.



Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: giantess jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 9:17 AM Title: the shrink

to banfield i role played on facebook and it helped me improve. The next chapter will be great also. If fact this story has been in my head and was uncerten about posting it but did it anyway.

Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 9:04 AM Title: humiliated

Ah, this is better. I'm still p[leased with your improved spelling. Are you sure you actually wrote this? But of course you did, I should not doubt you. Good work!



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Reviewer: banfield Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2017 3:20 AM Title: the shrink

O yes, as Shadow remarked, your spelling has improved remarkably well. Your short story would have been more exciting if the "prey" had been a male. Are you into females then? I would, as you can guess, be an half unwilling prey.



Author's Response: this just came to mind so i went for it. Im into males. But i never did a female story.

Reviewer: TheShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 6:43 PM Title: Kate vores Nikki

This chapter is much better where it widens out to the width of the page. Also,, you are greatly inproving in your writing, Jessica.

Keep it up. Keep improving the grammar and the flow of the story.

Reviewer: TheShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 1:51 PM Title: the shrink

Good start -- I'll be watching for more.



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Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2017 1:03 PM Title: the shrink

May I ask why your lines are always so.. short? Barly a quarty of my default scaled browser window is filled by your stories text.



Author's Response: im using a phone but this story is not done. I planed this one out and next chapter is next.

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