Reviews For "Swallow Her!"
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Reviewer: Vintovka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 11:32 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

I really like the idea of shrinking people for internet points becoming another expression of "it's just a prank, bro!" that, of course, eventually goes too far.  And I enjoyed Olga and Fulda, but might be biased on that.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 11:14 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

First off, major improvement since the last story! Second... I nearly was in tears when Anali dissolved into nothing.. the way you wrote her passing.. like it meant nothing to Olga and the others except Fulda. It was so cruel and heartless that it really got to me... 

Expertly written. I'm certainly keeping an eye out for new stories by you.

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