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Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2019 2:23 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

Why write something so horrible your one sick person I don't get off on killing like you have you had a family member beat or torcherd and and have two or more drown them well I Have you make like killing person is a joke.

 

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2018 7:03 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

really hot story. would like an unaware story with something like this in the future. keep it up

Reviewer: ChrisBel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2018 1:52 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

Very interesting the way you described Anali's digestion. Very detailed,  I liked it. 

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2018 2:44 AM Title: "Swallow Her!"

awesome story. hope you write more. I love cruel plots and dark ironic endings.

Reviewer: Vintovka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 11:32 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

I really like the idea of shrinking people for internet points becoming another expression of "it's just a prank, bro!" that, of course, eventually goes too far.  And I enjoyed Olga and Fulda, but might be biased on that.

Reviewer: Frizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 11:14 PM Title: "Swallow Her!"

First off, major improvement since the last story! Second... I nearly was in tears when Anali dissolved into nothing.. the way you wrote her passing.. like it meant nothing to Olga and the others except Fulda. It was so cruel and heartless that it really got to me... 

Expertly written. I'm certainly keeping an eye out for new stories by you.

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