loved the cruel ending of them making a pact of it never happened, who will ever find out, no one, it never happened, where was the harm, right.... right....
Why write something so horrible your one sick person I don't get off on killing like you have you had a family member beat or torcherd and and have two or more drown them well I Have you make like killing person is a joke.
pound sand, nevermore.
really hot story. would like an unaware story with something like this in the future. keep it up
Very interesting the way you described Anali's digestion. Very detailed, I liked it.
awesome story. hope you write more. I love cruel plots and dark ironic endings.
I really like the idea of shrinking people for internet points becoming another expression of "it's just a prank, bro!" that, of course, eventually goes too far. And I enjoyed Olga and Fulda, but might be biased on that.
First off, major improvement since the last story! Second... I nearly was in tears when Anali dissolved into nothing.. the way you wrote her passing.. like it meant nothing to Olga and the others except Fulda. It was so cruel and heartless that it really got to me...
Expertly written. I'm certainly keeping an eye out for new stories by you.
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