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Reviewer: Darkestlight10 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10 2024 11:14 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Will you ever continue this story? Got addicted to your work over the weekend

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2023 6:58 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

I wish to see a world where all moms are Majors, only moms not others.

Reviewer: Ralgar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2021 5:42 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

I really hope u continue this story at some point.

Reviewer: DarkStarGoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2018 3:03 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

I wish this website had a better communication feature... oh well another review it is. X3  The numbers might help generate interest if nothing else.

 

I figured you were being pessimistic to shield yourself, honestly I do the same thing when I post a chapter every 1-2 years so I totally get you (but I will be honest even if I am my own worst critic the criticism can still sting), but I still wanted to spread some holiday cheer just in case, since again your recent stories have brought me a lot of happiness in reading them and playing with the ideas presented.

 

Oh and not terribly important, but yeah I meant BIG FEMALE little male by F/m... though honestly I was asking if this story contained much BIG FEMALE LITTLE MALE because......... well I do not dislike F/m, but F/f is my preferred cup of tea (more relatable for me), and when I thought this story was going in a more F/m direction I ADMITTEDLY GOT A LITTLE HUFFY and did not read... none of this is important, I was more explaining why I was not able to actually review this story, because I have not read it YET for.... weird reasons of mine as stated above. X3

 

PERSONALLY I am looking forward to any F/f stories you work on, however I would never tell you to do that; you need to write what you want to write, writing for other's peoples tastes can... lead to issues, I have found.  If your vision is F/m then so be it. :3

 

I think your proposed idea is interesting though; I get the message might not be good (however you could try to write it so it has a better message... or have them not end up together, or bring in a third party), but I also love the size difference mixed in with relationship drama... I'd probably read it.

 

No idea if I made any sense I do not know, I have a bad habit of coming to this website REALLY LATE and being a bit fuzzy headed.  Either way you rock and your writing rocks I just want you to know it is enjoyed and appreciated. :3

Reviewer: DarkStarGoddess Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2018 5:03 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

I notice a lack of reviews on recent chapters and some pessimism, so I feel like now might be a nice time to add some encouraging words.  ...However I have not read much of this story recently, I should and I intend to but I have not read the story it is corssing over with and well... you know thinking, I am probably off.

 

I put this story down because I sensed it might go into a more F/m direction (not entirely but some) from wherever I left off, and noticing that the story it is crossing over with is tagged F/m I was just sort of like... eh, I'll see it later.  But I am JUST NOW THINKING I might have written the story prematurely; how much F/m is in this anyways (besides probs next to none like in your other recent stories).

 

Anyways, the reason I decided to write a little something was just to bolster your spirits a little by sharing that your last two stories, Small and MAJOR/minor, more or less were what got me coming back to this site, and enjoying size fiction at all. Such quality F/f is hard to find here (hell F/f and quality by themselves can be hard to find), so your stories got to me and made me decide to not abandon this place, and finally make an account, which led me to reading a number of other good stories.  I love your ideas for interactions and power dynamics and they gel so much with what I enjoy writing as well, it's made me want to write more myself (... have not done a lot of that between 2 jobs and classes, but sometime).

 

So even though if it seems like no one is listening, you at least have someone watching your activity and reading... most things... I will probably go back and give this story another go honestly.  I also look forward to whatever else you put out.

 

-DSG



Author's Response:

Well first of all I'd like to give a most sincere thank you for your kind words! Roadhog thumbs up emote for you!

Secondly I'm just a pessimist by nature when it comes to the things I create in both writing and drawing. It's how I cope with criticism. Nothing hurts when you are your worst critic. Maybe not the best approach but it's what I got. Also I do try to be a little jovial about it in an attempt a dry humor.

I do know people read my stories. There's some nice little numbers next to the read count that go up a bit when I upload chapters although maybe not as much as they used to, but hey that's the grind! I do this for fun and practice as I work on my true passion of cramming as much g/t stuff possible in a story driven sci-fantasy webcomic that may or may not happen!!

As far as F/m subject matter. I do write stuff like that it's just not how this story shook out too much because the main character's a girl. I also have ideas for more naughty stories too but I'm really bad at writing that and I don't like having too many stories going at once since that's how MrSirk screwed up. Don't read his stories!

I do have this idea for a small guy getting forcefully seduced into a relationship by a larger than life female bully maybe even in the MAJOR/minor world cause I like that size difference. Something kind of like GHX. It would be a little darker though cause it would deal with different forms of abuse and control and maybe wouldn't be the best message overall since the pair would end up together in the end. Just thinking about it gives me ideas. Maybe I'll write that story someday...someday.

I assume F/m means big FEMALE/little male but I'm not sure..I hope this answers your questions.

Reviewer: steveg17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 10 2018 9:34 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

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Reviewer: Kurogane335 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26 2018 1:17 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Also, double review because... Mei is here ! Yes ! The conniving, manipulative, smexy Asian from the main series is here ! And she's obviously trying to get Izzy in the bargain with Shannon... and the Matthewson is a shark when it comes to everything which isn't related to Alejandro, so I can see her selling the poor little and afraid Minor to this big bad Yellow Lightning !

Also, the gang going to school is kind of crazy -but less crazy than the alligator's permit. I wonder how I'll manage to fit it in the timeline of New Lives, but I will ! You hear me, I will !

I somehow hope that they'll stumble upon Sammy (especially Mei) just to see if they all have PTSD from Queen Brenda unleashing her psionic abilities on the poor innocent (not) MAJORS around her ! 



Author's Response:

Yes! Mei is back! Not that she really went anywhere. She was on that flight to New Orleans. Turns out it was more for business than pleasure. Not sure she's specifically bargaining for Izzy as I don't think the minor wpuld appreciate being traded in a business deal that has nothing to do with her, but knowing Mei something's probably up. She didn't have to fly to New Orleans for that meeting. In this day and age you can do most business over the phone and internet. Drop an email. Mei! That speaks volumes of Shannon that she'd be willing to sacrifice Izzy for a negotiating advantage though. Ruthless.

As for the gator licence. You planted the seed. I figure that would have to be regulated just to save the gators from getting hunted by hormone crazed MAJOR teens! That's prime Youtube material!Feel free to do with it what you will. 

Thanks for the double comment.

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2018 6:43 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Love is so mean...

Okay, if someone read my review on the latest chapter of New lives, then you know Im a big Lindsey fan, and ot reflects on this; to me Sabrina was really annoying, and a couple of her insults were too mean spirited for my taste, like "Gross man body" is really something hurtful and rather low to say and Im happy that Lindsey had the right quip to it, because no matter how hard she tries, Sabrina cant deny she is Izzy´s step sister now, and thats not something that is easily overcome. Now, I ask you, is it normal on this society to date step siblings/siblings?or is still wrong? In any case I prefer Lindsey way more than Sabrina.

 

Which at the end of the day doesnt really matter because she has a crush on the man of the hour, Rando himself!I dont know what to think of it. Izzellah´s crush is more than obvious, and if it keeps going well...so obvious it will break Lindsey´s heart. Not to mention she is still rather judgemental(jealous?)of Shannon, which, acording to word of God(Kurogane335) isnt against an open relationship of sorts. Maybe there is a threesome or polyamorous relationship in the future?who knows!well you are the author, so you know ;) As for shippings goes, Im not a fan of Sabrina and Izzy, like Lindsey and Izzy more, and as good as Izzy and Alejandro can be, I dont want him to be away from Shannon in any way. Though there is Samantha Paolini who could be great for Lindsey or Alejandro...and of course Lisa. Lets never forget about Lisa and how Lindsey eyed her.

 

One more thing, I wanted to ask your permission to rp with others on discord on the MAJOR/minor universe, entirely Ocs, nothing related to characters or events of your stories. And if anyone wants to add me, rp if I get permission, or talk about these series add me!my discord is Naoru #8749 

Sorry for the shameless self promotion, but it would mean a lot to get your approval. You have made an amazing universe and I love it!

 



Author's Response:

Hey! First off go ahead and rp or whatever you want. You have my blessing if that's what ya need. 

As far as Sabrina and Izzy go. It's probably as looked down upon as it is in real life. I'm not trying to promote incest I just like drama and think the nature of their parents relationship makes Izzy and Sabrina's potential romance more tragic. It's like a soap opera. It's honestly not fair for them and it probably won't work out especially with Gloria being pregnant now. Sharing a half sibling would make things even more awkward. That being said MAJORS are far more open when it comes to minors in general which maybe makes it less taboo to MAJORS. Minors are kind of seen as sex objects to some. Part of it is that minors have short life spans so any romance with one is more celebrated because it will be so fleeting. So there's some MAJOR/minor psychology for you! It's a pretty complex issue and I'm sure some psychiatrist in the universe has written dozens of books on it. That all being said if Izzy announces an interest in Sabrina they would have their parents blessing. It's kind of thier fault the two even met and they kind of set it up to begin with. I'm sure some in society would look down on them though. That's why Lindsey picked at the subject. She went right for the jugular but then again so did Sabrina!

Izzy does have a crush, but also knows Alejandro is engaged and respects that too much. Plus she's very afraid of Shannon. It would take a lot for that to workout. Kurogane might write my characters in his story. Will see what he does. If/when that ever happens. As far as Izzy and romance in general? She's too busy for it at this point in her life. She's open to something happening but she's not actively persuing it and trying her best not to be a tease. 

Thanks for the comment! 

 

 

Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2018 7:14 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Didn't expect to get spoiled in this story but that just makes me want to read even more of the Classic. How did relationships grow and how did Mei get her hands on Izzy.

Glad to see Izzy and Sabrina have grown closer. Izzy still having that fire in her to continue doing her own thing even making Shannon feel slightly intimidated. Also its nice to see Izzy wishing for a younger sibling even though she kind of wants to "mold" this giant sibling into being a better person towards minors.

Guess I need to read the other Major/minor stories in the mean time to get more familiar with this world.

Thanks for another great story.

Reviewer: Daxel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 21 2018 9:22 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Wait, what did I miss ? Why is Mei "infamous" or "antagonist" ? and what do "her first ever" even means ? This story is like a big spoiler and I truly enjoyed just like I'm enjoying the main story.
Which reminds me I need to drop a review there too.

Author's Response:

I suppose there are certain things you could infer. Im my continuity this takes place in the future so some things that happened. Unfortunately I won't continue the special until I finish MAJOR/minor specifically to avoid spoilers, but uhhh....feel free to speculate.

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2018 1:25 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

Wow, nice new chapter, thanks for writing it!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Also, a broken computer on a site full of nerds, how is that possible?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the appreciation! The broken computer definitely sucks but I won't let it keep me down.

Reviewer: wowmaster101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 9:32 PM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

you asked about titan in your notes at the end of chapter 2.

They made their own website. it called thetitanempire.com



Author's Response:

Really?! Thanks! I always wondered what happened to it and why it disappeared. It was growing a bit too big, (fitting for a gt site) but there were some stories I liked. I'll check it out.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2017 10:41 AM Title: MAJOR/minor SPECIAL: Don't Call my Name

The ending was my favorite part. Izzy finally being nice to Sabrina. I also like the idea of Izzy trying to help raise a sibling to have respect for minors, and not in a condescending way. Finally, I actually like Gloria a bit more after this story. She's kind and not deterred by Izzy's negativity. Eventually, I think Izzy will crack and like her too, just a bit.



Author's Response:

Izzy and Sabby are at least friends. It's been almost a year I figure they've grown closer by then. Will it become something more? Who knows? Also Gloria's in it for the long hall. Izzellah will be pretty miserable if she doesn't at least learn to tolerate her mother from another universe!

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