Reviews For Blink
Reviewer: thewiseman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 11:45 AM Title: Arrival
Author's Response:
Date: December 21 2017 11:45 AM Title: Arrival
Good stuff so far, some tension already and well written.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the feedback!
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 6:20 PM Title: Arrival
Date: December 17 2017 6:20 PM Title: Arrival
The character dialogue should be a little more widely spaced apart from the narrative text. Otherwise, not a bad opener!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had it reasonably spaced out in my word doc. It was all nice and formatted, then I paisted it into the writer and my formatting disappeared. :( Thank you for the feedback.