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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2017 11:22 AM Title: Introduction

Let me guess. In chapter 4, he makes the mistake of drinking something called "Mini-chevitz."

LOL!

Seriously though; thanks for updating this. A most tasteful present.

Merry Xmas!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback Cary.  Merry Christmas to you as well.

Reviewer: thewiseman Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 11:45 AM Title: Arrival

Good stuff so far, some tension already and well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2017 11:13 AM Title: Social Butter

More girls from marching band? Interesting! Any of them baton twirlers/majorettes?

Author's Response:

I may have some plans for that.  Stay tuned. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2017 6:20 PM Title: Arrival

The character dialogue should be a little more widely spaced apart from the narrative text. Otherwise, not a bad opener!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I had it reasonably spaced out in my word doc.  It was all nice and formatted, then I paisted it into the writer and my formatting disappeared. :(  Thank you for the feedback.

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