Date: December 25 2017 11:22 AM Title: Introduction
Let me guess. In chapter 4, he makes the mistake of drinking something called "Mini-chevitz."
Seriously though; thanks for updating this. A most tasteful present.
Thanks for the feedback Cary. Merry Christmas to you as well.
Date: December 17 2017 6:20 PM Title: Arrival
The character dialogue should be a little more widely spaced apart from the narrative text. Otherwise, not a bad opener!
Yeah, I had it reasonably spaced out in my word doc. It was all nice and formatted, then I paisted it into the writer and my formatting disappeared. :( Thank you for the feedback.