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Reviewer: asapshvn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Carpe Diem

Mmm. Really good, and I loved the sexy times at the end :)



Author's Response:

More coming!

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Carpe Diem

I still cant imagine that the only of her kind a giant woman will be forced to stay at the discovered place on earth even though a solution is at hand. The only problem Mark has to be carefull about is not to get tricked by some contract trap by some big company offering her a free transport in exchange for.. some giantess porn or abusing Zava for other evil plans.

Last but not least, 12 years in the future from now on, who knows how expensive heavy cargo transports are and its after all your story so you can take the right of artistic freedom. I mean you already did with implementing a giant woman so why stop there and not implement cheap air cargo flights? :) unless its your will to keep Zava trapped where she is, as protective as you are over her XD



Author's Response:

You've got a point there. If I'm gonna be honest, the story is pretty clear in my head until she leaves the hangar after the quarantine. After that, there are some scenes I've always wanted to write that have never been explored in GTS fiction, but besides that, I'm still trying to figure it out how to weave them into the plot and connect them to the current storyline. But Zava for sure will leave the island and travel elsewhere soon, that's what I think, one way or the other.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Carpe Diem

I wonder if Zava could be secured inside an Antonov 225 to fly across the world :>



Author's Response:

I'm sure in 2035 in the timeline they live in they probably have civilian aircraft that could do the job, but it would probably cost too much for Mark (I know a little about this and an hour of flight from a 747 costs about $200 000 US dollars per hour, which with the roughly 3-4 hours it would cost to get from the east coast to LA would be close to a milliun bucks... )

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