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Reviewer: Rainman1131 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 26 - The Getaway

Liked both of the newest chapters. Nice reunion in the first one. Love how Zava's holding up during all this, even being able to take delight in the tiny people and things around her, even when she has to pee so badly. Proud of ya, girl!



Author's Response:

I hope I'm doing justice to the way you envisioned Zava in your story. Hopefully she'll continue to grow as a character.

Reviewer: 280077s Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2017 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 26 - The Getaway

I'm curious as to how Zava will fair if she has to stay on Warth indefinitely. You mentioned in a previous chapter that a being as large as Zava couldn't possibly survive in Earth's gravity indefinitely, she'd eventually be crushed under her own weight. I think the dimensional rift will have to come back into play at some point to perhaps help solve this dilema. Then again, part of me doesn't want Zava on Earth, if only for the fact that humanity has a habit of ruining good things.. Part of me think's we wouldn't deserve someone as compassionate as her.

 

I hope Zava's stay on Earth doesn't taint her, I'd hate to see a caring character like her become cynical, jaded, or evn hateful..



Author's Response:

Ha! You just gave me an idea. If you notice, I have avoided mentioning the name the giants use for their own planet.  The earthlings simply calll it 'giantland'. Maybe I'll call it Warth! 

 

Just kidding. That's what Dr. Poole thinks. Let's see how it plays out. It is not in Zava's nature to be evil,so be easy on that count (let's just hope nobody messes with Mark on her watch, trust, me,they'll be sorry they did). 

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