[Report This]Date: December 29 2018 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
No, the story must go on! Seriously what you have done for 44 chapters has been awesome, if it's ending are you or others looking to do a squeal? Again thank you for at least 45 Chapters of Awesome!!!
Author's Response:
Much remains to be written, maybe RainMan (coauthor) will do Zava and Mark's wedding, I may add some chapters in the future, but I think any story deserves a timely ending before overstaying its welcome. Stay tuned!
Date: March 30 2018 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
typo *sorry*
Date: March 12 2018 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Hey, paisalandia.
That's another nicely descriptive, sexy chapter. Love your detail.
As far as my contributing a chapter, I guess I'll have to pass. I've got a lot of RLCs right now, as well as a mainstream writing project that takes most of my spare time. Please keep on with this excellent story, though.
Thanks.
Author's Response:
Anytime you have some spare time, please do not hesitate to write, if you have any ideas. The story is now approaching its end.
Date: February 16 2018 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Hey, paisalandia.
My first thought on your suggestion for me to add a small chapter was, hell, no! I really like what you've got going here, and I do not want to screw it up. Also, I can only guess where you're going with the story; anything I would add might be a serious deviation from the direction you're going.
And then I had an idea for a stand-alone type chapter that wouldn't affect the main story line. I'm thinking Betty is invited over, one thing leads to another and, yay! threesome!
I might even like to take a shot at imitating your style - which tends to be more detailed and sexually explicit than my own (I may have to bust out my thesaurus).
Let me know what you think about that, or if you had something else in mind.
Author's Response:
Hello RainMan. Sorry for taking so long to answer. I'm about to write two chapters detailing the end of Zava's captivity. What do you say you give it a shot after that?
Date: February 15 2018 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Ha! You know, I really love that my name is on this story, too (even though I didn't write a word of it!).
The Chilton character was a very nice addition (fake news!), and Zava's response to him was hilarious and in character.
I also enjoyed the sexy chapter in the warehouse after the meeting. I'm a little worried about Zava, though; you don't want to get that stuff in your eye. That's interesting how you portray Zava's continued fascination and arousal when it comes to Mark's manhood. Rather than ridicule him on the 'size' issue, she seems to take extra delight in it because it's so small, and yet, um, functional.
Another reader made a comment that I found funny - saying that Mark and Zava's sexual encounters tend toward the 'vanilla'. I hadn't thought of it that way at all (which shows what flavor of ice cream I am, I guess).
It is a true delight to find new additions to this story.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Hello RainMan. Glad to see you're still paying attention! I was wondering if you'd like to write a small chapter as a guest writer. It'd be nice to see your take on where Zava and Mark are now as a couple, as characters and in the story.
Date: January 06 2018 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Hmm. I like all the comments your story is generating, though I don't always agree with them. For instance, I wouldn't agree at all that there is a lack of drama. I guess you could say that there is a certain linear progression to the story, with Zava and Mark dealing with the situation as best they can, while keeping up their wonderfully weird, steamy relationship.
I don't think you need to pull a rabbit out of a hat, and suddenly have Zava hurt someone, or have the military or the government make some kind of move on her. I think there is plenty of drama and anticipation about how everything will play out already. My guess is that as we are focused inside the warehouse with the happy couple, there are machinations going on in the outside world about which Mark and Zava are completely unaware.
Anyway, this continues to be a sexy, beautifully-written story, and I look forward to seeing how it all turns out.
I appreciate that you took my story as a starting point to yours, but as far as the erotic content and detailed writing are concerned, yours makes mine look like a tame prologue.
(I'm not putting myself down, mind you. I actually think I'm pretty awesome. :) I just mean I really love your story, and can't wait for more.)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comments, RainMan. I've tried to portray their relationship relatively realistic (with the caveats I've mentioned elsewhere like the limitations in worldbuilding and the necessary handwaving to physics sometimes), as a normal gal and guy in love, dealing with problems larger than them stemming from their size differences and their challenging environment, supporting each other when one of them needs it to make it through without breaking up and without going loopy as they try to enjoy life together the best they can. Neither Zava nor Mark are violent by nature, and things like stepping on a little person or crushing her/him with her body would really, I think, scar her irreversibly (as it would any normal person who ends another's life). Like I said elsewhere, I want them tohave adventures, but I do not want them to go through living hell.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2018 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
I wish you best of luck. Im starting a life as a mother so i dont know when i will stop writting but i think soon.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2018 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
What made you decide to make a story from The Land of the Giants? https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/c/c7/Landofgiants.gif I love the show. Im just courious.
Author's Response:
Hello Jessica. I watched the show back in the 80's when I was a kid, and felt there were so many missed oportunities for sexy interaction between the tiny people and the giants... then I saw RainMan1131's stories here and in giantesscity (check them out) on the same LOTG setting and decided I wanted to add my own take, sexy but keeping the gore to a minimum. And here we are! Enjoy!
Date: December 31 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Ah ok, cool. That was a typo on my part obviously. I fucking hate when that happens...
[Report This]Date: December 23 2017 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
want to rp? Im amazing at it.
Love the story. I am currently working on Lesa's revenge with theshadow. But i am a good writer.
Date: December 17 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Very cool developments. Nice to see Betty back in the mix, too.
Date: December 14 2017 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Mark
Yay! It's back!