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Reviewer: Grandmaster B Signed [Report This]
Date: March 23 2018 8:49 PM Title: (Bonus) Alaric and Ariel

Nice addition to the Major/minor series really enjoyed the characters and the world building. Glad to see Alejandro able to keep up with Majors keeping them on their toes even having control over his younger siblings which love him so much. Couldnt be more happy that Alaric was able to find and help a minor he could love showing that there are Majors are able to love instead of just dominate. Really enjoyed both families even though Shannon took it way too far with her mother. Not many stories have the younger sister actually calling their smaller older sibling "big brother" which is a big plus showing how much Lindsey loves Rando.

Thanks for the story.

 



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking the work here. It's all thanks to NotSirk story, of course (plus each of his chapter push me to try harder ^^). The Alaric and Ariel chapter is one of my favourite because of how it allowed me to develop a character who hadn't had a lot of spotlight (and won't have much for the forseeable future, really). And yup, Shannon was really unhinged when it came to her family and especially her mother, but I'm happy that I've managed to craft believable and likeable characters ! 

So, thans for the review !

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Date: January 22 2018 4:35 AM Title: (Bonus) Alaric and Ariel

Wow! Good for Alaric! No joke. I've become really attached to your characters! I really want to know what Lindsey's up to now, or Shannon and her family? Have they reconciled?! What's old Rando up to?! Ahhh!!! Why would you do this to me?!?!

Also just so you know. Since Ariel's a female minor....she has a significantly larger than normal chance of birthing a full minor or halfsie. I mean...That IS how Izzellah exists in the MAJOR/minor world! I hope Alaric's prepared for that! Geez I could just read a story about that! Ariel's really cute too. Her circumstances are probably fairly common for a minor. Lots of potential for abuse there by nature. She's really strong for surviving that. 

Good add on! Why are people writing so much?!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Don't worry, we will see more of Shannon, Lindsey and Alejandro (I plan to write a story about them in High School in New Orleans sooner or later). As for the kids... well, I suspected as much, but I don't think that Alaric really took it into consideration, he has found his soul-mate after all, he has time to think about it.

As for why I write so much... it's a mix of boredom and craving to write, kind of like a fire inside that calm down when I write. Thankfully, it isn't always on, so i can do other things !

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