Reviewer: NotSirk Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2018 7:00 PM Title: Consequences

Okay so probably through habit I didn't realize you had uploaded two chapters and skipped a chapter. So now that I've read it in order and have added context and perspective I xan give an insightful comment.

Cherry Overrock! Best character!

Seriously though. Alejandro has some guts! Holy shit I would not walk into that room. I can see what you said about that dark moment being the key to the ending. It's almost perfect. Shannon in a bid to romance Alejandro doesn't realize she's just as bad as the MAJOR who damaged him. Wow! 

Can't wait to see the end of this one!

Author's Response:

Well... It's over, but be careful, reading the actual final chapter before the Epilogue ^^