[Report This]Date: January 02 2018 10:06 AM Title: Admitting weaknesses
This story is so cute! Please don't stop writing it.
I really enjoyed the last chapters and am already looking forward to the next ones.
Thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Thank for your support ! Another chapter should come out tomorrow or Tuesday, depending on my schedule :) !
Date: December 31 2017 8:53 AM Title: Admitting weaknesses
Geez! I come back from holiday and youhave like three chapters done!!! I am so far behind!
This was a tough outing for Alejandro and the night's not even over for him. Out of his comfort zone, surrounded by MAJORS, insulted multiple times! I don't blame him for snapping or taking a break. I'm actually pretty angry at Shannon for grilling him! I know it might have worked out but he also deserves his space, and has a right to his anger! None of them understand!
That all being said I like how their relationship is developing. Aejandro will have much to consider before pursuing something more with Shannon. Little displays of casual domination will be commonplace around her especially. Don't be naive Jandro. You are swimming with a shark an a@ex predator. Can you handle that? What happens if you have another argument and she can so easily submit you? Think about it man.
Author's Response:
Well, my chapters are like a third of one of yours, at best, so it's pretty even ^^ And I had boredom and no supervising at work, so I had time and motivation to work a lot :p
Shannon means well, but in truth, she probably has even more difficulties than the average MAJOR to actually leave space and agency to a minor. She's young, never bonded, taller and stronger than almost any of her kind and a billionaire... and all that discounting her upbringing, where Alexis did drill her in the whole MAJOR=power=dominance. She'll have a lot to learn if she wants to make it work with 'Rando, because her sheer size won't allow her to win all arguments, it could even cost her everything she is currently pursuing, after all.