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Reviewer: pixl8ed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2017 8:54 AM Title: Realization

This is pretty amazing.  In Shannon you’ve created a real cornerstone character.  Both wild and thoughtful.  Passionate and planning.  One might not agree with all her decisions and directions, but there is so much going on with her all the time.  What a ride (as Alejandro might say.)

But for all her intelligence, she’s still struggling to get in sync with Alejandro.  It seems like they’d get along famously if they bonded, but what would Alejandro think if he could see what’s really inside her?  So, it might seem like a solution to their problems, but it might just lead to more concerns. 

In other words: great work and you really have me hooked.  Great characters making great drama.  Excellent.

Thank you for keeping at it and have a happy new year.

Peace

pix



Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you had a great Christmas ^^

Shannon is turning into quite the character, isn't she ? Hopefully, she won't blow it up with Alejandro. Next chapter should be crucial in the growth of their relation, if I manage to write my idea down adequately !

And Happy new year to you :)

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